Reviews for a day at the pool
CsillaDream chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
Oooo I liked where that was going XD
Kattyto.Ktalin.Ivkovic chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Dats was funny. :
Mukuro234 chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
Hehe I loved that lol cute allen
AllenxEdward chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
I like it! Funny and cute at the same time. You really didn't have to rate it M, it's T material, but I understand being cautious. Great story!
izaya chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
awwwwwwwww
LightMyBulb chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Just saying, you're supposed to capitalize the beginning of every sentence...
sleepingbueaty chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Whoa Allen...seme mode.