|Reviews for Unsaid|
| la canelle chapter 2 . 2/22/2016
You need to update this. I like it and wanna see what would happen next.
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/19/2015
It's not stupid or cliche. I haven't read a story like this before .I want you to make more chapters!
| Sammi 007 chapter 2 . 10/20/2012
| Anahbell chapter 2 . 7/30/2012
Not cliche or stupid or anything! It's marvelous! Please continue as soon as you can. In my own opinion I think it should be longer though, each chapter.. it should have more detail too if ya can. I love the inner thoughts though, that's how I write. Please continue this, I beg you.
| Aurora Marie Williams chapter 2 . 7/26/2012
Great job with chapter 2! It's really interesting to think about Danny having to keep his secret from his best friends. Can't wait to find out when the revelation will come!
| DannySamLover20 chapter 2 . 7/21/2012
nice! keep going! ;D
| PFTones3482 chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
hmmm...continue this please!
| CaptainOzone chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
What a brilliant start! I'm always immediately hooked by fics like this, and I cannot wait to see where you take it.
You write Sam amazingly, by the way...and you've really balanced her character well. I've noticed that some writers tend to over exaggerate certain aspects of her character, be it her Gothic preferences or her vegetarianism, but you were the opposite. Her sense of humor is spot on, in my opinion. :)
| Aurora Marie Williams chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
I did like this story and here is your review! The whole concept that Sam and Tucker know nothing makes the story better, since it creates the drama and plot :) Sam's reactions are perfect by the way, you did a great job developing her. The scenario's that Sam's talk about, mostly with Danny, are extremely accurate. That's what she would most likely be thinking if she had no idea about he connection between Fenton and Phantom. I'm glad that you didn't make same totally oblivious to the fact that Phantom looks like Danny and has all the same facial expressions and the aura since they are one in the same. A lot of cartoons and fan-fictions make all the characters completely stupid by not realizing the similarities between their friends and the superheroes. So, a major thank you :) This story is truly amazing, keep writing!
| DannySamLover20 chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
nice! keep going!
| zipporah grace chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
You have me officially hooked. I like this idea a lot, and you're a very good writer and did a great job of writing in Sam's perspective. Keep it going!