|Reviews for Closer Together|
| Kiraloverless chapter 1 . 9/13
I very much enjoyed this fluffy one shot. I wish Shiniubu and Miyagi all the best smut they could ever hope for~3
| FammeFatale chapter 1 . 10/1/2015
Wow I really was not expecting that...smut overload - but I'm happy you surprised me ;)
I like how you capture their character, especially Shinobu was very close to the original and the explenation why he wants Miyagi in him was actually very on point.
| nightlover38 chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
lol Miyagi's lines are so bad. The story is great and so long omfg!
| Druekee chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
i have to say, it's rather hard to come across really good junjou romantica fanfiction- but this was absolutely stunning! you really captured the essence of miyagi and shinobu's relationship, and built their relationship up in a way that i found fitting, realistic, and in a way that i could definitely see being incorporated into the actual series. you also had fantastic wording, effortless descriptions, and beautiful imagery.
a detail i didn't necessary like or dislike was probably how obsessed shinobu was with having penetrative sex. personally, i find penetration to be rather overrated and cliche. but since you actually incorporated some good reasoning behind why he's so into it, i can't really say i disliked how you added it.
anyway, fantastic read! you're very talented with spacing your porn, and i can appreciate that. thanks for writing posting a gorgeous work of fiction for a fandom that hardly has any!
| lv90047 chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
HOLY MOLY GUACAMOLE!
It was SEXY. I just died. xD
You have a talent, my friend! Please write more!
| lee chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
My goodness u are amazing
| Strawberry-Yaoi Fangurl chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
THIS WAS SO KAWAII! (Cute) You did an amazing job of keeping them in character but showing the readers their inner thoughts. Have you ever heard the drama CD? I used to not like this pairing them I listened to the CD and read your story and I fell head-over-heels for this couple! YAOI POWER FOREVER
| Mimimikan chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Their characters are wonderfuly written and the whole smut was pure bliss. Love it! Beautifuly written, great job! *w*b :thumbs up:
I especially loved how you described Shinobu's personality :)
| wishIwereanime chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Very well written and deliciously citrusy ;D
| Chiho Kazusa chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Oh wow, hidden smut added with romance flavour (that's what I'm seeing on your *cough*porn*cough*). Yours most likely to tell smut in a romance way, not intensely only on skinship. You make my heart melting and grinning widely.
I never too fond to tero-pair to be honest, but after seeing yours, I could see why others love them *giggle*.
Too bad my native language not english, so I can't write well on smut, though I'm happy to write it anyway *sigh*
Thank you for updating!
| ArtemisisSymmetrical chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
This was amazing, the perfect balance between smut and romance. I loved it! XD
| zemira chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
Ok, I think I'm ...somewhat... more awake to give you a somewhat worthy review now. Where to start besides saying this was such a wonderful read? I don't know if it was AZ'S Shinobu humor (Oh god, Kamijo and the thong thoughts had me rolling) and then there was also risque's,
"Miyagi... can we do it on the chair?"
"N-No... on... his chair."
(By the way, you are at full responsibility for getting me to love this couple more but I regret nothing.)
AZ'S snowball fight was just classic and adorable. "Looks like I made a snow angel./Okay, so maybe I made a snow devil." !
And of course risque's smut is always on the spot.
Kamijo is going to have a real interesting Monday morning when Miyagi doesn't stop his intense girly giggling when he keeps looking over at the chair, huh?
Great job, you two. Truly superb.
| AZ1087653 chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Yea! It was posted. What a great thing to wake up and see first thing in the morning (technically afternoon for me).