|Reviews for breathing patterns|
| Aldebaran das Areias Vermelhas chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
| Aeronith chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
I love this. You used the second person really well, and it's just fantastic. Great job.
| Roy-Fan-33 chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
Oh god, I am so fucking moved right now. I read this while listening to Into The Trees by Zo Keating, and I got so many chills. This was lovely.
| kai-kakashi chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Aw this was very sad, and sweet.
I like the break down of Zuko's character, and the comparison between him and Aang, nicely done.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
This is so beautiful; the psychology of inference and diction is just as good as what actually happens. I love your style, it's so easy to empathize and feel the characters. I can't wait to see more from you! Please keep writing!
| thepianoplayer chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
| c chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
I love this, I love the tone and the second person and the story. I love this.
| Fallen1 chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
That was beautiful. I'm sitting with tears in my eyes and it's that bittersweetness that makes me want to read the longer story you're planning but also makes me afraid that I'll cry for real when I do.