Reviews for Candice City
crys195 chapter 6 . 12/9/2015
I over how you made rosa so friendly to her and joke with her even though they just met
Emberscar chapter 6 . 2/18/2015
So far, this is a pretty good story, I like it. I love how you get the personalities to each characters down! And for a 14 having written this, it's a good read :) Keep it up; I hope you continue this story, I'd like to see how it ends
Guest chapter 6 . 8/21/2014
LOVED IT ALL! You should totally do more! Fav part was...(drumrole)...EVERYTHING! :) (On knees)Please do more, please do more, please do more!
goddessgirl02 chapter 5 . 8/7/2014
Great story alisexcastiel
Angelicia chapter 6 . 6/12/2014
Oh my god girl add another chapter. You know you had me crying oh my god. It is dramatic in a good way.
nekogirl017 chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
OMG! Totally love This game! Castiel is GORGEOUS!
moriah.latham chapter 6 . 1/23/2013
hey why not make another story with loveing lysander he doesnt really hve that many. hmmph but i definitly HOPE & PRAY that your laptop gets fixed bcuz i am in love with this story. yeah i liked it that much i absolutly positivly cant wait 4da next chapter! FINNALLY SOMEONE TOLD AMBER WHAT NEEDED TO BE SAID! 'that b**** needed it BAD!
moriah.latham chapter 5 . 1/22/2013
lol i reallly wanna c it now :)! :D
Katerina-Evasivi chapter 6 . 11/25/2012
Love the corset fitting! Great chapter (as always) Update soon!
izukey chapter 6 . 11/1/2012
On my 16th birthday (last month) I told my mom to tell me 'happy birthday' and she said 'what's so great about it?'... I wore her down eventually though, hahaha.
I love how you make it so that Alise (Ah-leese, as emphasized many times) conveys her emotions like a real person, and lets me feel what she feels. The way it's not just 'I felt very sad', but rather 'I felt myself falling apart, ripping with grief'. I love it, I love how I can literally feel her pain, that I actually feel her heart-wrenching longing for her daddy.
Lazy hero chapter 6 . 10/21/2012
Same birthday as me and this was the best present :)
xxXLoneWolfXxx chapter 6 . 10/17/2012
I loved the scene when they were on the bench! There happy? LOL!
djrocksforever chapter 6 . 9/8/2012
this is a awesome story, love it. thanks for posting this can't wait till the next chapter is posted
Acacia Fynn Mellark chapter 6 . 9/7/2012
I reaallly cant wait for more of this. i must have more Castiel 0.0 Alise is an amazing character that i can conect to in so many ways. I am honestly waiting for this to appear again cause i NEED to know what happens next! :D
Moonlight-Dreaming chapter 6 . 8/27/2012
This had me laughing the whole time XD
It was to funny :P
I hope your laptop starts working again soon.

Sincerely,
-Moon

P.S.
Happy late birthday! :)
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