Reviews for Candice City
Emberscar chapter 6 . 2/18
So far, this is a pretty good story, I like it. I love how you get the personalities to each characters down! And for a 14 having written this, it's a good read :) Keep it up; I hope you continue this story, I'd like to see how it ends
Guest chapter 6 . 8/21/2014
LOVED IT ALL! You should totally do more! Fav part was...(drumrole)...EVERYTHING! :) (On knees)Please do more, please do more, please do more!
goddessgirl02 chapter 5 . 8/7/2014
Great story alisexcastiel
Angelicia chapter 6 . 6/12/2014
Oh my god girl add another chapter. You know you had me crying oh my god. It is dramatic in a good way.
nekogirl017 chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
OMG! Totally love This game! Castiel is GORGEOUS!
moriah.latham chapter 6 . 1/23/2013
hey why not make another story with loveing lysander he doesnt really hve that many. hmmph but i definitly HOPE & PRAY that your laptop gets fixed bcuz i am in love with this story. yeah i liked it that much i absolutly positivly cant wait 4da next chapter! FINNALLY SOMEONE TOLD AMBER WHAT NEEDED TO BE SAID! 'that b**** needed it BAD!
moriah.latham chapter 5 . 1/22/2013
lol i reallly wanna c it now :)! :D
Katerina-Evasivi chapter 6 . 11/25/2012
Love the corset fitting! Great chapter (as always) Update soon!
Toraffles chapter 6 . 11/1/2012
On my 16th birthday (last month) I told my mom to tell me 'happy birthday' and she said 'what's so great about it?'... I wore her down eventually though, hahaha.
I love how you make it so that Alise (Ah-leese, as emphasized many times) conveys her emotions like a real person, and lets me feel what she feels. The way it's not just 'I felt very sad', but rather 'I felt myself falling apart, ripping with grief'. I love it, I love how I can literally feel her pain, that I actually feel her heart-wrenching longing for her daddy.
Lazy hero chapter 6 . 10/21/2012
Same birthday as me and this was the best present :)
xxXLoneWolfXxx chapter 6 . 10/17/2012
I loved the scene when they were on the bench! There happy? LOL!
djrocksforever chapter 6 . 9/8/2012
this is a awesome story, love it. thanks for posting this can't wait till the next chapter is posted
Acacia Fynn Mellark chapter 6 . 9/7/2012
I reaallly cant wait for more of this. i must have more Castiel 0.0 Alise is an amazing character that i can conect to in so many ways. I am honestly waiting for this to appear again cause i NEED to know what happens next! :D
Moonlight-Dreaming chapter 6 . 8/27/2012
This had me laughing the whole time XD
It was to funny :P
I hope your laptop starts working again soon.

Sincerely,
-Moon

P.S.
Happy late birthday! :)
JinxSpunk chapter 6 . 8/26/2012
Well.. HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY! Haha, I'm glad I found this now, I'm really excited for more! This is my first time reviewing a story so sorry if it's not what you'd expect..but it probably is, Anyway! This chapter was great, story wise I love your collaboration of the characters and your own twist to the plot. It's really awesome and I do hope I get to read more soon! You have a great sense of humor that's brought to the story, I've tried to write some fanfiction myself and envy your way of words haha. Well, my favorite part along with the fact that I adore Castiel is his and Alise moment of talking before the crazy dog losing principal interrupted. I don't have any negative comments to make at the moment but only to keep WRITING! Excited for more.
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