|Reviews for What Happens on the Normandy|
| Zarohk Korobase chapter 7 . 3/12
Interesting chapter, especially with what Alex inflicts on Miranda. The funny thing is that when I read the CDC chapter that this connects to I had thought that what happens is Alex realized what the magazine was about and tried it on Miranda… who wasn't screaming in pain, and so their dislike turned into (U)ST.
| GuesssWho chapter 6 . 3/7
| GuesssWho chapter 3 . 3/7
I miss this series
| Gestie chapter 7 . 2/2
I thought Miri would be a victim to a...eh nevermind
| Tsu no mumei chapter 8 . 1/9
I wonder if you'll do continuations? like Kasumi #2 or Tali the second, I would love to see how those little Omakes develop
| Tsu no mumei chapter 7 . 1/9
ooh... poor Tali, she must feel a little guilty... I wonder how long Miranda screamed for
| Guest chapter 8 . 12/23/2013
Not sure how this would fit but how about Alex meeting aria on omega
| Seanbob1 chapter 8 . 12/24/2013
you should definitely make one of these where he talks with Legion about all the things they have in common
| AnAncientBard chapter 8 . 10/31/2013
This is by far the best chapter.
You should do more from EDI's perspective, you do it really well. : )
Keep it up and update soon!
| Uraharaisgod chapter 7 . 10/29/2013
Aww, much as I wasn't hoping to actually see what you may or may not have meant when you wrote that scene, knowing that this is what actually happened kinda spoils the scene as well...it makes far more sense than the idea that he would put Fornax into practice as punishment, but still, I think it was more humorous if it had been left as it was.
| alexsbiggestfan chapter 8 . 9/28/2013
I would like to see a reaction with jack or mordin.
Jack sees him leaving his mancave and asks what his problem is.
mordin gets him to agree to be examined and studied
| SyQadelic chapter 7 . 9/5/2013
Wait... Doesn't the Tali retrieval mission come AFTER the fornax incident?
| BloodWolf752 chapter 8 . 8/12/2013
Alex and Garrus interaction maybe?
| cg811890 chapter 2 . 8/8/2013
I think it would be interesting to watch a chess match between EDI and Biomech!Alex were he actually wins.
| diamondfiend chapter 8 . 8/6/2013
Shouldn't that one line in chapter 8 be EP_ADDRESS/CLASSIFIED instead of IP_ADDRESS/CLASSIFIED? If IP means internet protocol then it would follow that EP means extranet protocol, and the internet seems a little outdated for Shepard's time. Other than that, I have no complaints; great chapter as always!