|Reviews for Aria of Fate|
| ANarrativeCloud chapter 1 . 1/16
Why is everything in your first chapter in emphasis?
| Hakurei no Miko chapter 3 . 12/18/2015
AHAHAHAHA I LOVE THE NEKOARCS also update soon!
| WaddleDood chapter 3 . 7/14/2015
Great stuff. Hopefully, you aren't dead.
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/9/2015
Awesome story please update soon
| ahsoei chapter 3 . 6/19/2015
So Shirou was able to use his sword-tracing in SAO... Awesome. XD (y)
Will he be able to use his reality marble a.k.a Unlimited Blade Works?
| Skippy chapter 2 . 10/6/2014
It's kind of all filled with boring dialogue with changes of POV that apparently are just there for characters to analyses another's actions... which really might as well be written in 3rd person POV instead! But really, talk is fine but it kind of falls flat when you use it to set the scene item-by-item instead giving a description the environment beforehand in more subtle ways (again, probably something to do with the POV)... Doesn't really feel like the story is going in any particular direction, though the initial info they got on Shirou was interesting...
| Skippy chapter 1 . 10/6/2014
Somehow, I don't think Shirou would have the same "can't logout" limitations as the other players lol But I can certainly see him spending most of his time in-game just to be helpful :P
| Endeavour1261 chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
I dropped after the "two girlfriends" thing. Sorry... Good Luck
| Acolyte of the Blood Moon chapter 3 . 7/26/2014
I love this story, a pity tha I only discovered it now. Carry on please!
| MidnightFenrir chapter 3 . 6/23/2014
Now that's a great story like i love it!
| Junky chapter 3 . 6/18/2014
Great. So whose hacking skills are these? Sion's?
| CrimsonMaimaiK chapter 3 . 6/14/2014
Thanks for the much needed fanfic fix :-) really lookimg forward what happens next. Keep up the good word buddy:-)
| riffin121294 chapter 3 . 6/13/2014
Super interesting, while i read i always though why saber not in,and suddenly in this chapter she's going. Great. At least shirou will have one of his gf
| Fimbulvetr chapter 3 . 6/13/2014
Not sure if I like the 3rd person but it was quite entertaining
| ultima-owner chapter 3 . 6/12/2014
the neko Arcs were amusing. Love that fight