|Reviews for banding together, or falling apart|
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/16/2013
is he an angel or a changeline is not clear but I like it.
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/18/2013
good idea, get to Butters and Bob to determin wath hi is an angel or demonic who can tell better then Bob.
| The Who chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
It shows promise but I'm frustrated by not knowing WHO ARE YOU? Who is this person narrating their story to the reader. A young guy? And old guy. A little 'ol lady ? What do you do all day? What is inspiring you to get involved? I assume you are single? Tell me something so I have some kind of picture of you in my head and can try to understand your motivations.