|Reviews for The Young Avengers Initiative|
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/13
Do more do more do more
| Guest chapter 9 . 3/13
I think it should be something that is the opposite of Loki. If not, give him the power of being a necromancer.
| Eclair chapter 14 . 2/6
Just saying no one but storm should be able to pick up tempestas. Like thors hammer only he could pick it up. same would go for storm and her weapon.
| anonymous chapter 14 . 7/8/2013
I hope im not too late and that you havent decided to stop working on this awesome story i fully support you and hope that unlike all of my fanfictions yours is successful you are a great writer i wanted to request a few things and hope that you will take them into consideration
1. Besides his powers of manipulation Loki had the powers to control ice and its other two forms maybe Mal can control fire to help stop his dad
2. I was hoping you could add an extra girl or two to the team later on perhaps brian has a long lost sister who is discovered when she loses control of her powers
3. Idk if you know this but there were other avengers black panther ( who fell in love with the xman storm) wasp and antman/giantman/yellowjacket ( those last two fell in love with each other) maybe these avengers could have children too
4.(and i promise this is the last one) Maybe the kids could find someway too hide their identities and go to a real school so that they can interact more with human kids their age it might even spark some love intrests
Again your fanfic is spectacular and i hope you noticed that i said maybe or perhaps in all of my suggestions i am not trying to force my opinions onto you just giving you something to consider this is problably one of if not THE longest review you have ever gotten if you have stopped the story which i hope you havent or are continuing it i hope my suggestions are helpful and have not wasted your time this is an awesome story and i hope you dont give up on it
| HawkeyeFan101 chapter 10 . 6/20/2013
Mal: God of Practical Jokes
| orcafan1 chapter 14 . 5/5/2013
Love love love it! Please update soon
| smartywannaparty chapter 14 . 3/8/2013
That was an awesome chapter :) I love this story please do another chapter :D
| pikachucat chapter 14 . 12/25/2012
| YouWILLbealright chapter 14 . 12/24/2012
Merry Christmas to you too!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
Why is Storm the only girl Avenger?
That's a bit Marysue don't ya think?
Or maybe you're remaking the whole Tony, Bruce, Steve, Clint, Natasha storyline?
Well anyways, Goodluck
| ecb chapter 13 . 11/20/2012
Please update as soon as you can!I lOVE this story,you're a really good writer
| Bobthepegasus chapter 13 . 11/8/2012
FLUFFYNESS! HAHA! EPIC, DUDE!
| Angelina chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
I wanted steve to have a daughter :(
| Guest chapter 13 . 9/22/2012
This is amazing, one of my favs! :D
| Cocolover77 chapter 13 . 9/21/2012
You updated! Another awesome chapter!