Reviews for The Young Avengers Initiative
Guest chapter 15 . 5/27/2015
Hi, can you please keep writing? I love this story soooo much! Especially Mal and cute!
Marine101 chapter 15 . 5/15/2015
cam chapter 8 . 4/21/2015
gotta love shawarma
Alajandra chapter 15 . 8/29/2014
Omg yessssss this is so gooood pleasseeeee update y u be leaving meh on a cliffhanger its really good.
pikachucat chapter 15 . 7/30/2014
orcafan1 chapter 15 . 7/30/2014
Update soon really good story
Black Raven Feather chapter 15 . 7/30/2014
For some strange reason, I think Storms face model is Torri Webster.
It's good! Please update soon!
Black Raven Feather chapter 4 . 7/30/2014
Technically, her last name would be Thordaughter. But, don't mind me.
Just Another Netflixer chapter 14 . 4/25/2014
Please Update!
Balongdag chapter 1 . 4/13/2014
I seriously doubt both Tony and Bruce would name their child after their fathers. Bruce's father (Brian) was an alcoholic, abusive and killed his mother. Tony's father was never there for him, hardly ever told him he loved him or was proud of him.m
Guest chapter 14 . 3/13/2014
Do more do more do more
Guest chapter 9 . 3/13/2014
I think it should be something that is the opposite of Loki. If not, give him the power of being a necromancer.
Eclair chapter 14 . 2/6/2014
Just saying no one but storm should be able to pick up tempestas. Like thors hammer only he could pick it up. same would go for storm and her weapon.
anonymous chapter 14 . 7/8/2013
I hope im not too late and that you havent decided to stop working on this awesome story i fully support you and hope that unlike all of my fanfictions yours is successful you are a great writer i wanted to request a few things and hope that you will take them into consideration
1. Besides his powers of manipulation Loki had the powers to control ice and its other two forms maybe Mal can control fire to help stop his dad
2. I was hoping you could add an extra girl or two to the team later on perhaps brian has a long lost sister who is discovered when she loses control of her powers
3. Idk if you know this but there were other avengers black panther ( who fell in love with the xman storm) wasp and antman/giantman/yellowjacket ( those last two fell in love with each other) maybe these avengers could have children too
4.(and i promise this is the last one) Maybe the kids could find someway too hide their identities and go to a real school so that they can interact more with human kids their age it might even spark some love intrests

Again your fanfic is spectacular and i hope you noticed that i said maybe or perhaps in all of my suggestions i am not trying to force my opinions onto you just giving you something to consider this is problably one of if not THE longest review you have ever gotten if you have stopped the story which i hope you havent or are continuing it i hope my suggestions are helpful and have not wasted your time this is an awesome story and i hope you dont give up on it
HawkeyeFan101 chapter 10 . 6/20/2013
Mal: God of Practical Jokes
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