Reviews for Shattered Dreams
Calliope evermore chapter 3 . 6/21/2016
This story is Amazing! I really hope you can update this soon if life allows. :) 3
Almadynis Rayne chapter 3 . 8/28/2015
What a really interesting idea! I really hope that your muse comes back!
ManyGamePlayer chapter 3 . 3/3/2015
I am finding this story very interesting! Please update soon! I want to know what happens! ;)
Guest chapter 3 . 11/16/2014
Guest chapter 3 . 10/8/2014
Sam put carly onto his lap you did deserve this as he pulled doen her pqnts and undies down he rose his free hand up SMACK oww stop she yelled SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK
Guest chapter 3 . 10/8/2014
The pqddle con tinued SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK ow her bottom felt onfire an hour later he rrear end was bllod red with one last SMAAAAAK
Guest chapter 1 . 10/8/2014
In the fourth movie primes human allies builds him a new bodie after he calls his new second in command assasin drift loyaltist crosshairs barbarian hound and the bumbpebee survivor a neutril security agent lockdown under command of the quintison federation and he takes autobot warships ark and nightship prime renames himself omega prime lockdown gives megqtron and his other soldiers advanced transformiam he renames himself galvatron and tries to take a cyberformerfrom the federation called the seed but a tuped rich man named cade trappes her down and spanks her with a paddle they attemt to enslave prime but after prime failure at the decepticon teamwaorkhe retreats into space lockdown and the decepticon resistanse pursue him in the nightship
Guest chapter 1 . 10/8/2014
Sg carly dragged by troopers wait!SHE Said I promise I will be loyal she was strapped wrists and ankles on the ground a N.E.S.T trooper came in with a paddle they zip down her motorcycle suit and vic undies please she said cryng she braced herself the pqddle raised and SMACK ow!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
In the third film the ark is discovered by the decepticon rebellion then megatron using the decepticon matrix of light to ressurect sentinal and wo he joins the decepticons he is able to defeat ironhid in a firce battle he attempta to kill goldbugbut ou of his new concius spares him after the human working with the decepticons sam tells prime and he is able to steal the pillars in megs attempt to destroy them the autobots decide the nations loyalty to the imperium is in question so he makes chicago an example science director shockwave is able to spy aon carly a sedctive women wheres vic secret undies and braw to control people she runs away after the bots fal to get cybertron back then megs blasts prime in the chest ending him N.E.S.T is disbanded lenox goes into hiding sam puts carly on a table and spanks her her with a paddle in refenge til there arrested her botto m is is blood red once they leave they think itw over...its not
Guest chapter 3 . 10/7/2014
In the second film the autobots are searching for the erergon key with NEST an elite human bot battalion led by general moreshower wich would create a new sun created by 13 warlords none as the prime as a weapon prime kills megatron then megatrounus takes command they wind up ressurectimg megatron prime then kills air commander jetfire and upgrades himself the twins are two assasins loyal to goldbug . prime tries to activate it with the matrix of conquest magatrounas ressurects megatron and sacrifices himself to save them the cons leave and captain lenox is going crazy dispaite his promotion to collinel.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/7/2014
Emperor prime and his lietenitenites landed on earth with the nightship under the command of emperor sentinal and his stronger than his master and braver second in command optronix and 2ith the kill torture medic ratchet sergent jazz a member of the autobot imperial guard The iron hide a barbarian outraged at his former major sideswipe joined the bots

In the first film sam and his criminal abusive father steal a 64 camaro after he gets another F during teaching the class about his pirate uncle discoverd and awoke general megatron the autobots capture him after killing captain barricade he then meets sentinal and gold bug security chief goldbug but megatron and his decepticon met vince a good kid and h2 taught them how to survive on earth along with MECH a rebelfore against sector 7 a terroist organization in the end sentinal is killed by sams cowardness to the darkspark optronix steals the matrix of conquest and retreats to the moon base having conquerd the un the decepticon s retreat to the nemeses to rendevous with chancellor megatrounas
Meraki Minnesota chapter 3 . 7/12/2014
Stellar story! I love the concept of using Shattered Glass with the '07 movie; makes me wish I had thought of it :)
I sincerely hope that you will continue working on this story; I'm in suspense about what's going to happen!

Have a great day,
Gloomy Nomad chapter 3 . 7/5/2014
Please update this is a great story , so please continue it , please .
buslimpan chapter 3 . 6/10/2014
Oh my... This is really good! Just wow!
Topkicker26 chapter 3 . 7/3/2013
...This is amazing. I just asfjakdsfkashdfkl;as I love how DIFFERENT it is! *heart*

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