Aaaaw I really liked this story ! It was sweet but not too fluffy and I liked the way you presented Ri and Zack :)
Especially that she thought she always looked at his back but then Zack said "You were always by my side" aaaaaww *-*

AWWW so cuuute w

I seriously thought I wasn't going to like it since it was an Original Character (Zerith fan lol) , but I loved it! I love how it's detailed, well-written, and I feel as if I could feel what she was feeling (if that makes sense lol) and how you made her character strong (thank God!). Also, the her 'looking at his back' thing reminds me of Naruto for some reason xD oh well, it's just me xD Anyways, I've read a few Zack and Aerith fics, but this was really an interesting read! AND I just love the sweet and fluffy moments, it made me squeal hehe. I'm glad narcotic-lullaby recommended me this story :) Thanks for an interesting one shot! And can't wait to read your future fics!

I loved Ri's character! She's a strong heroine, and that's totally refreshing to read. The way you portrayed her, especially with her stubborness, ego, and insecurities was really spot on for the type of environment she's in. ("Given any time of the month..." what a douche!) I like the way you symbolized her change with the haircut, since she's literally cutting a piece of herself away (the "unsightly feelings") to make room for a change. Nice! I kind of wished we could have seen how she changed, though. Like, some type of event during those two weeks that caused her to change, or even describing the haircut would've got me to fully understand how and why she changed.

Puppy also fit in perfectly, and it's cute to see him care about Ri x3 He's naive but sweet and he definitely fits his nickname, especially through little details like him answering his phone when it was a message xD The drinking scene was also really funny, I loved it :D

As always, the detailing in your work is amazing and I absolutely love the way you write :) Keep writing awesome stories!

Awe!