|Reviews for shattered windows and the sound of drums|
| Anon chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
I'll be honest, I don't usually *like* fanfics that try to be "unique" with fragmented cryptique.
This was more or less that kind of fanfic, using feelings and thoughts as interjections to keep the plot unfocused.
The lack of dialogue, names, and identification was actually well used, and it makes the story seem broader in scope (or more like Runescape trululu). The locations of "Gielinor" or "Taverly" were more or less unnecessary to the point of being almost jarring, and could've been cut to make a sad but generic war story. Who needs the Runescape moniker? Abandon its presets and have confidence in establishing original ideas!
Man, I sound really negative. Don't get me wrong; this read left a very good taste in my mouth. Unlike many other authors, you don't plague your works with grammatical errors, and you seem to have an idea of what you want to say. Have a cookie! I thoroughly enjoyed this!