Reviews for Shrink Wrapped
melyons chapter 8 . 10/18/2015
Stephanie did save Julie. She let herself be captured to get to her. Julie is an ungrateful pup.
melyons chapter 3 . 10/18/2015
Ranger didn't need to lie. Stephanie asked nothing. She never does. He is an ass.
Ohtootsie chapter 21 . 7/19/2015
After Shelter in the Storm the past few weeks, I moved on to Shrink Wrapped. I love your Antonio, and how much he loves Stephanie, even though she's Ranger's girl. Your characters have depth and emotion, and as usual, I'm so glad that you've shared them with us. 3
56 olds chapter 16 . 6/17/2015
Love your version of Ranger
aruvqan chapter 7 . 6/5/2015
Army brat. My dad taught me to shoot when I was 8.
StubbornPansy chapter 21 . 5/13/2015
Thanks for opening up some of the mysteries about Ranger!

Excellent writer.
StubbornPansy chapter 19 . 5/13/2015
I don't like her seeing someone connected to Julie. It is unprofessional it has a creepy feeling to it.
StubbornPansy chapter 18 . 5/13/2015
Sorry Antonio but too much arrogance!

He needs to learn temperance like Ranger.
StubbornPansy chapter 17 . 5/13/2015
Not sure how I would act if I had a man who could read my mind.

Might be fun though?
StubbornPansy chapter 16 . 5/13/2015
great writing.

trying to explain the unexplainable.
StubbornPansy chapter 15 . 5/13/2015
They will never understand Ranger!

How do you explain a fantasy that is actually reality?
StubbornPansy chapter 14 . 5/13/2015
Still do not see how this line of questioning will tell her anything on how Julie is feeling about killing a man.

I think Marilyn is just plain nibbing where she does not belong.
StubbornPansy chapter 13 . 5/13/2015
Can you imagine how powerful Julie will be when she gets to be a teenager?

But people will always be drawn to her.
StubbornPansy chapter 12 . 5/13/2015
with looks like Ranger's you have to expect some hero worship for years to increase the ego. Ranger seems to keep his tightly controlled. Until Joe come in the picture that is.
StubbornPansy chapter 11 . 5/13/2015
I wished I had the ESP thing with someone. Whether they looked like Ranger or not!
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