|Reviews for Together|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/5/2014
Everthorne or Galeniss.
| Qwerty616120 chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
Aw, poor Gale :( Nice drabble though! Very well written! :)
| ForeverPeeta's chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
I LOVE NUTELLA AND YOUR AN AMAZING WRITER! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
Forever Peeta's, BlondeKatniss
| MentalDauntless42 chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Cheers for SUZANNE COLLINS [and cuteypuffgirl of course...]
well, tats all i hv to say...
| Username-not-taken chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
Wow. I may be biased due to my love of angst but I felt that this was wonderful. I loved how you begun the story. It was especially strong and it really made me feel for the boy in just a few simple words. I really love how you focused on his emotions. Apart from the fact that there was an occasional single line break when their should have been a double, such as,
" "It'll pass," he muttered to the two.
Katniss attempted to reply but the menacing crackling of lightning and the onscreen scream of a tribute silenced her "
should have had a space between "two." and "Katniss". It's alright the way it is, but it would look neater and be easier to read with a proper gap. Other than that your grammar was fine and you stayed in tense well.
| TheHungerGamesFan01 chapter 1 . 7/18/2012