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Shadow40000 chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
Name: Aaron Steele

Nicknames and/or code name: "Ace" (just coz he likes it)

Gender: Male

age: 18

Nationality (include accent if any): American

Spoken languages: English

birthday and birth place: in the school gym (just kiddin.. just kiddin... dont get mad okai? :P NY

sexuality: Straight

appearance: around 5'10" in height, 80 kg weight, Messy brown medium lentgh spiky hair. a Goatee and sideburns for facial. fair complexion. average built. Oh.. his eyes... for unknown reasons, when he gets angry, which is quite often, turn coal black. obviously making him looks like some kinda freak, i guess..? even after he's cooled down, the eyes stay like that for a while so he hides em with dark shades(googles).

Personality: due to his mutation, he tends to be quite frustrated many a times... well, i'l explain it later below...v other than that, he's quite friendly. likes company, drinks(non-alchoholic :P) girls(cute or hot), and guns. not a big fan of reptiles, but might adjust if need be. self-concious, so whenever his eyes go black, he feels veery awkward and embarassed, especially those stares he gets, make him very nervous.

Beliefs: a strong believer in God(guess that sums it up?). not the extreme nutcase or anything, but, y'know has his faith and all.

Weapons: an m4. took a huuuge stock of ammos for it while running away from home(well, i'l explain that below too. he's a runaway, yeah. but his dad is a very well known person and has quite the contacts, hence the ammunition.) and a katana.

skills: His mutation is his extremely heightened reflexes. and for some reason, when he is angry, they double and in the process his eyes turn coal black as mentioned above. he was trained well in combat. his weapon of choice is the M4 and for face-to-face combat, his Katana. he uses his reflexes as advantage and is able to dodge or evade a decent amount of enemy attacks unharmed. but obviously when there are too many, he can't dodge em all. and he uses his training for offense, and his mutant abilities for defence. thats his style.

Power: umm.. as mentioned up, superhuman reflexes.

Weakness: due to high reflexes, he reacts to even the slightest of movement at times, when its nothing at all... this frustrates him very much. and his experiencing death of his parents in front of his eyes(i'l explain how they died below...v :P, he tends to react with hostile means to anyone(well... mostly guys.) He might drop his guard TOTALLY in front of a cute chick. so yeah hot girls are his weaknesses too.

secrets: his eyes. He keeps hiding them from almost anybody and everybody. he just doesn't like them to be mentioned even. hence the glasses. but maybe he might get a little free in the sewer rats.

Allies: anybody i guess?

Enemies: Medusa.

Group: Sewer Rats? any group will do really. other then the Medusa... yeah. or a loner will do too.

How they found/joined the group: if the sewer rats, one of em saved him when they found him unconcious outside the steele estate when they were out to get resources or something.

Position in group: obviously the weapons department.

Romantic interests: when your talkin bout Aaron. just bout any hot chick will do. he's a pervert in extreme terms. (not totally, but well/ hope u get the idea.)

History: he is (was) the son of a wealthy family. was the only child, hence pampered and all that. but he was trained well in combat by a very expert trainer. his father noticed the mutation in him and got him trained incase of an emergency. the emergency being that he was on bad terms with the Medusa. He being a wealthy dealer of ammunition, was one of the few who actually knew the Medusa. the medusa got pissed for some reason, and got the whole steele estate eliminated. Aaron tried fighting some of em, managed to kill one or two but there were too many. he witnessed his parent's murder in front of his eyes. he went berserk and tried fighting till the end... and then a blackout. when he next opened his eyes, (if u plan on adding him to the sewer rats,) he was in the sewage. he found out he was saved by (someone) when he was found unconcious outside the estate in a corner. how we ended up ouside is beyound him. Decides to take revenge on the Medusa for this.
if a loner, he found himself outside the estate fallen in a corner all bruised and beaten. he started on his own with only one thing in mind. Destruction to the Medusa..!

good/evil/neutral: Neutral. all he wants is the end of the Medusa.

Views: he has nothing against mutants or humans as long as they aren't part of Medusa. he totally hates em obv cz of the loss of his loved ones. he sees war as the only way to peace :P.

Clothing: Dark shade tank tops (any sleeveless tops. often with torn off sleeves.) and a jacket over it, Jeans and his most prized possesion, a Yellow stone locket. a family hierloom given to him by his father.

Possessions: His Locket, his M4, his precious Katana and the basic ammo in his backpack.

Hope he is good enough? it'd really love if u'd use him :D thanx for yer time.
pink penguins chapter 3 . 7/23/2012
Name:Reyna Diez

Nicknames and/or code name:Berserka

Gender:female

age:14

Nationality (include accent if any):Puerto Rican

Spoken languages:spanish and English

birthday and birth place:1998 june 14 the Bronx

sexuality:bisexual

appearance:wavy black hair navy blue eyes and tan skin

Personality:she is really sweat and nice but if you get on her bad side she'll berserk on you

Beliefs:she thinks mutants are superior to humans but if they arent trying to hurt her shes ok with them

Weapons:a pocket knife no that she needs it

skills:she does kung fu and boxing

Power:she can control water and make you feel as of your under water so she can drown you also when she get mad she turns into a giant water monster

Weakness:her power weakness she can dry out her regular weakness is that she is scared of small spaces

secrets:her parents threw her out when she was 10

Allies:anyone who she can trust

Enemies:people who hurt her and her friends

Group : sewer rats

How they found/joined the group:when she was looking for food in a garbage can at 10 years old and shes been with them ever since

Position in group :she can be a scout or someone who teaches fighting

Romantic interests: she would be with someone like Quick sliver

History:her parents hate mutants so when her power came out her parents threw her out but before then she was spoiled

good/evil/neutral:shes neutral she does what she has to do to

Views:she hates the war and humans and she loves being a mutant

Clothing:she wears beach type clothes she always wears a leather jacket

Possessions: she has a mesanger bag with a few shirts and pants and a about 50 bucks

Are you ok if I kill the character , put them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes to them:yeah im ok with that
BettyCrocker540 chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
Name: Syrena Rose Erickson

Nicknames and/or code name: 'Rena ; Codename - Cura

Gender: Female

Age: 19

Nationality (include accent if any): Swedish-American

Spoken languages: English, Swedish

Birthday and birth place (I dont mean what hostpital or if they were born in a f*cking toilet, I mean state or country): July 20th; Gothenburg, Sweden

Sexuality: Straight

Appearance ( include height, weight, hair color and style, skin color, eye color, body build, facial features and anything extra like scars, tattoos or piercings, or physical mutation if any, I think you get the point now): 5'7", 120 lbs, athletic but slender figure, light golden blonde hair that's wavy and reaches to about her mid-back, blue-violet eyes, fair skinned, a slight dusting of freckles spreaded across her cheekbones.

Personality: Syrena is best described as a sweet, brave, down-to-earth, and sympathetic teenage girl - always ready to lend an ear to a friend in need. She expresses wisdom and patience beyond her years and offers kindness and guidance to those around her. Very much a free spirit, she often listens to her heart more than her head. Her rebellious nature and love for adventure sometimes gets her into trouble. She’s an easygoing soul who is eager to please and makes friends easily. Syrena does a jealous side and can be a bit tempermental especially when someone's being obnoxious, sexist, or stupid.

Beliefs: Catholic, karma, good things come to those who wait

Weapons (if any, be realistic, they aren't gonna have a grenade launcher and lazer guns): None

Skills (beside their power, include fighting style): Her mother made Syrena take self-defense classes, so she knows the basics. She may not be the best martial artist fighter ever but she can take care of herself.

Power: Flawless Restoration - the ability to heal all kinds of damage: mental, emotional and physical. Syrena's healing ability tends more toward repairing mental and emotional damage like restoring memories but she can heal physical damage as well, although healing physical damage can take much more time. Given her healing abilities, Syrena also has a healing factor.

Weakness (power weakness and other weaknesses): In order for her powers to take affect, she has to have physical contact with the victim and when healing physcial injuries it takes more energy and focus than healing emotional and mental injuries. Syrena has the average strength for a woman of her age

Secrets: Syrena didn't tell her mother that she's a mutant

Allies: Syrena is willing to be friends with just about anybody except for enemies

Enemies: People who are self-centered, liars, arrogant, sexist, obnoxious, cold-hearted

Group (include at least two you'd prefer them to be in but I will have the final decision): Bandits or Captured

How they found/joined the group: When the war started, Syrena left her mother and started traveling aimlessly around until she found a group called the Bandits. They said that she could only join if she could somehow benefit the group. Syrena told them of her healing-based powers and that she could not only heal physical wounds but also mental and emotional damages. She joined the group by proving herself that she is useful/helpful. If she's prisoner, when she was traveling she got captured.

Position in group (ie: infirmary, weapons (teaching and making), guard and/ or look out, brute (defense, could teach the younger ones to fight), scout (goes out and collects resources). not all groups will have every one of these so choose two or give me one you come up with): Infirmary

Romantic interests (don't give me a specific person give me a type of person or an example, your character may or may not have a love relationship): To Syrena, love is layered; she believes that it's a mystery to be uncovered. So she will be attracted to mysterious guys and probably someone

History (include before the war, maybe a bit about their family and how they found the group they are in if they are in one): Syrena is an only child who grew up in a small west coast town (Arcata, California) with an absent father and an overbearing mother. Syrena's mother always wanted what was best for her daughter but Syrena however does not appreciate that her mother "is in charge of every single day of my life." Syrena started to develop a rebellious side when she started surfing and rock-climbing which are both extreme sports. When she was fifteen, Syrena was rock-climbing a cliff when she misstepped and slid a few feet down but she caught herself and when she scaled to the top, she noticed that she had a big gushing cut going down her leg. As she went to bandage it, the cut was quickly healing right before her eyes. So, Syrena than decided that she wouldn't tell her mother about her new found gift because of her mother's hatred for mutants, so she tried to go on with her life keeping this secret. With the current war happening, Syrena felt that she couldn't deal with the guilt anymore so she up and left her mother and went on her own believing that her mother would be safer without a mutant around. Syrena then found a group called the Bandits and they said that she could only join the group if she could somehow benefit them. Syrena told them of her healing based powers and that she could help anyone who needs medical attention - mental or physcial. Syrena was than accepted into the group.

Good/evil/neutral: Good

Views (how do they view the world as it is, what do they think of the war and how do they view mutants and/or humans): Syrena loves being a mutant because she can help others with her powers. Syrena absolutely hates the war. She's more of a peacemaker and likes to not use violenct means unless it's self-defense. She likes to follow the saying of "let's build bridges not walls."

Clothing (not just one outfit, give me a general idea and maybe a few examples): Syrena typically wears the standard jeans and tanktop/tee shirt with tennis shoes. She likes wearing blue and green colored theme outfits and likes to keep it natural.

Possessions (what do they travel with ie: a backpack with a few changes of clothes, a bit of food, a water bottle.. etc. They are not going to me carrying makeup and hair products or laptops and game boys, be realistic. Also include anything they carry on their person): She has a backpack filled with a clean set of clothes, a bag of chips, a protein bar, a water jug, a picture of her and her mother, her father's military tag

Are you ok if I kill the character, put them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes to them? Sure

Anything else I need to know about them?: Syrena's father was actually killed by a mutant due to the war and it explains her mother's hatred. Syrena feels depressed by this because she had to live a life without her father and she didn't even get to know him.

Give me a few plot ideas that I can use with them (optional): Syrena could actually find the mutant who killed her father and will want revenge... i don't know, sorry :/

Just PM me if you need to know more :)
Flowergirl95 chapter 3 . 7/21/2012
Name: Caleb Roberts
Nicknames and/or code name: Cal, Cally, codename Phoenix
Gender: Male
age: 18
Nationality: Scottish, faint Scottish accent.
Spoken languages: English
birthday and birth place: 21st June, Glasgow
sexuality: Straight
Appearance ( include height, weight, hair color and style, skin color, eye color, body build, facial features and anything extra like scars, tattoos or piercings, or physical mutation if any, I think you get the point now): Standing at 6'2, he weighs 147 ibs, and has a lean build, with clear muscles. His eyes are golden brown, and he has very rugged features, along with deeply tanned skin. His hair matches his eyes, golden brown, but has five red streaks running through it.
Personality: Caleb is a very playful, childish person. He's very energetic and doesn't like to sit still for too long. He likes to joke around and have fun, but he does know when to stop, and always makes sure no one ever actually gets hurt by his games. No one he cares about anyway. He can be very serious, though when that happens, it's normally trouble. He's happy to take orders as long as the person giving them has earned and maintained his trust, otherwise he tends to get touchy about being told what to do. He's stubbornly loyal to and protective over his friends, he adores them, but he also holds grudges, and he's not likely to be forgiving if anyone betrays him.
Beliefs: Never hit women or children, mutants have to band together or we're going to fall apart.
Weapons: None
skills: Running, climbing. He tends to just dive into fights and just see how things work out afterwards.
Power: Predominantly a healer. He can heal anything up to and including broken bones on others, but it hurts them for him to do so, as he's speeding up the rate at which they naturally heal, so the worse the injury is, the more it hurts. He himself has rapid healing abilities, but if he gets too badly injured, he bursts into flame, which will heal any and all injuries. He can create fire, and is immune to it, but he can't control it.
Weakness: When he's healing someone, everything around them rapidly heats up and anything flammable is likely to catch fire. He himself is immune to fire, but his clothes and anything around him obviously isn't, and will get destroyed if he bursts into flames.
Secrets: None
Allies: Other mutants.
Enemies: Humans
Group: Bandits, Sewer Rats
How they found/joined the group: He found them while he was hiding from the police.
Position in group: Healer, scout or look out.
Romantic interests: Someone playful and energetic, or alternatively, someone more sensible and level headed to balance him out.
History: Lived in Glasgow, liked hiking and took trips with his parents and younger brother. Had an accident when he was fourteen whilst hiking with a friend, who then died, but his mutation kicked in and saved him, permanently changing his appearance slightly (his hair, eye and skin colour all changed to some extent). When his parents found out, they wouldn't let him stay, so he gathered what he had and has been travelling ever since, trying to avoid the conflict.
good/evil/neutral: Good.
Views: He can see no real difference between humans and mutants, this whole war is ridiculous, it's just one group trying to prove that they're better than the other.
Clothing: Jeans, hiking boots, t-shirts, and his waterproof jacket.
Possessions: A change of clothes and underwear, two water bottles, a notebook and pack of pens in his backpack, and his pocketknife, which he normally carries somewhere on his person, often on a chain around his neack.
Are you ok if I kill the character , put them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes to them?: Yes.
Anything else I need to know about them?: No.
Give me a few plot ideas that I can use with them (optional): ?
Ninja Kat chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
good/evil/neutral: Neutral

Views (how do they view the world as it is, what do they think of the war and how do they view mutants and/or humans): She doesn't believe that if they are human or mutant that it determines whether or not they are good or bad, that all depends on the person.

Clothing (not just one outfit, give me a general idea and maybe a few examples): She has two pairs of black tank tops and hunter green nitted sweater for at night or in the winter. She has two pairs of cargo pants (one hunter green and the other gray) and one pair of sweat pants for at night to sleep in. She has a hunter green jacket that keeps her warm enough and a hooded scarf that she wraps around her shoulders (she keeps the hood on while wearing these, she always has one of them on). And she only has one of worn out black combat boots.

Possessions (what do they travel with ie: a backpack with a few changes of clothes, a bit of food, a water bottle.. etc. They are not going to me carrying makeup and hair products or laptops and game boys, be realistic. Also include anything they carry on their person): Faye wears a satchel that she wears on her left shoulder and rests on her right hip, containing: A change of her other clothes, some fruit or meat if she has any, a bottle of water, a compass, ammo, and a knife (there's a lot of things you can do with one knife and her other throwing knives).

Are you ok if I kill the character , put them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes to them? Yes but I would like if my character stayed alive for awhile at least or be alive (your choice).

Anything else I need to know about them?: nope got everything covered I think.

Give me a few plot ideas that I can use with them (optional): ne but when if I do I shall let you know.

Yeah I guess I put to much of the history in there and it cut off the last few questions so haha :D
Ninja Kat chapter 3 . 7/20/2012
Oh and her codename can be changed to Ambush
Ninja Kat chapter 3 . 7/20/2012
Sorry didn't see chapter two and would like to change my power for Faye and would instead like her to have Heightened senses and Kinetic Aborption (the same as Sebastion Shaws) look it up if you don't know what it is, so you may change some things if you would like. I hope you can still use her in your story(:
Ninja Kat chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Here is the forum:

Name: Faye Wolf

Nicknames and/or code name: Shocker

Gender: Female

age: 18

Nationality (include accent if any): Irish, and yes she has an accent.

Spoken languages: Irish (you could put the words in bold if want her to speak this language so that you don't have to go on google or explains what she is saying)

birthday and birth place (I dont mean what hostpital or if they were born in a f*cking toilet, I mean state or country): Octeber 13th in Ireland.

sexuality: straight

appearance ( include height, weight, hair color and style, skin color, eye color, body build, facial features and anything extra like scars, tattoos or piercings, or physical mutation if any, I think you get the point now): Faye has pin straight platinum hair that's breast length and bangs that covers the right side of her face. Faye has electric blue eyes and if you look close enough they appear to be glowing. Faye has a oval shaped face, high cheek bones, slightly sunken in cheeks, a small pixie nose with a nose ring on the right side. She has a small slender build but is toned (kind of an athletic type body), she has deathly pale skin looking as if she has never stepped foot
In the sun before (she has very sensitive skin and prefers to stay in the shadows), she stands at an intimidating 5'2 (note my sarcasm here) and weighs 100 pounds (sadly she fears she will never grow) and has not a small but not too big bust size (this is good, because she don't need her boobs bouncing in her face all the damn time).

Personality: Faye is a short-tempered and distant girl. Faye has never really felt like she fit in with other people, being the odd one out, the freak. She Always stuck to the side lines, in the shadows watching how other people interacted with other people and how easy it was for them. Faye has never been much of a talker, Even being called mute by other children when she was younger, it's not that she couldn't talk, she just chose not to, but when she did it was a simple answer in a blunt and monotone tone, her most used phrase being "Shocker". Faye was distant toward people yes, never liked crowds or when people touched her (she had a bad experience when she as 14) so she has quite a hard time with trust "I don't trust people who are not worth trusting" is another known phrase. Faye has been a fighter her entire life, she had to fight for things (she grew up in a poor orphanage) even had to steal just to get some food, and trust me if you didn't know how to fight then you were going home (whether it be a hut or card board box) with out anything in your stomach. When challenged to fight by others who thought they were better then her, she would not back down, that would show weakness, and weakness was not an option there. Faye has never had any friends and due to this fact does not know how to act toward people, usually staring blankly at the or just completely ignoring them. What? It's not like she knows how to interact with people like the rest. All Faye has ever wanted is Be shown kindness, to be accepted, of course she knows this is highly unlikely (I mean look what happened to the world, but it wouldn't have mattered if the world was all rainbows and pixies or if it was a piece of shit like it is now, because people have no more kindness) that is her thoughts on the whole matter. Faye is very calm most of the time almost showing no emotion what so ever but if you EVER piss her off, well... It's your death wish bud.

Beliefs: She doesn't know if their is a god anymore, and if there was, he sure in the hell isn't doing anything now (these are her thoughts on god, but I 100% believe in god, this is just my characters beliefs).

Weapons (if any, be realistic, they aren't gonna have a grenade launcher and lazer guns): She carries with her small throwing knives that come out of god knows where, and two hand guns that are strapped to her thighs in a holster, and a hand made bow and arrows (this is usually used for her to catch food and ambush)

skills (beside their power, include fighting style): She knows Mixed Martial Arts (and is very skilled in this still) and she knows gymnastics (this can be used for fighting purposes and makes her extremely flexible), she is also very good at ambushes (she usually is found in trees, hell she never steps foot on the ground).

Power: The ability to control, generate, and absorb electric fields. In other words she can manipulate electricity by will, and when using her powers her eyes have a static affect to them.

Weakness (power weakness and other weaknesses) : Faye gets really weak when using to much of her powers (gets dizzy and feels tired) and she loses control of her powers when she gets to angry.

secrets: She was raped when she was 14.

Allies: people who she feels she can trust, who can show her kindness, and acceptance, things she has never received before.

Enemies: People who hurt her like that man did, who not worthy of her trust, and treat her like she is weak.

Group (include at least two you'd prefer them to be in but I will have the final decision): Loner

How they found/joined the group: She doesn't have a group

Position in group: Ambush

Romantic interests (don't give me a specific person give me a type of person or an example, your character may or may not have a love relationship) : sure, and if she wanted one, she would have to completely trust this person, someone who can make her smile (she has never really had the disire to do it, nor was there a reason to) and some one who won't hurt her again.

History (include before the war, maybe a bit about their family and how they found the group they are in if they are in one): Faye grew up in Ireland in a small hut with other children and two women as there care takers (it was meant to be an orphanage for children). Faye was sent there when her mother, a young women who had no family left and had no idea how to care for an infant, so she took her to a small hut in the woods, and was greeted by two women, one young and the other older. She gave them the baby and left with out a word. The two women raised the baby girl to the best of their ability but couldn't help but think that there was something different about her, the little girl that never talked and stared out the window all day. Faye from since she could remember was different from the other children, since the day she discovered the sparking lights that came out of her finger tips or since the day she shocked that boy and made him lose consciousness for two days. None of the other kids would talk or play with her after that, but she didn't mind, she didn't like them anyway, they were mean, and called her "Mute". But it was because they were scared of her, of what she could do, of what's she was, a Mutant. Faye grew up not knowing who her real parents were, but never really asked, just assumed that they didn't want her and it was end of story, but she still wondered what really happened. As said in Personality, Faye had to fight to get what she wanted, she had to work, or just sit back and ain't for death to come, but she didn't because she was determined to live, to fight. She learned how to fight by a man in the forest, he looked to be in his mid 30's and taught her everything there was to know about fighting, Mixed Martial Arts to be exact (a mix of different fighting styles from around the world), his name was Angus and he saw something in Faye, he saw someone who wanted to prove everyone one else wrong, who was going to do anything she could to live. Faye taught herself how to do gymnastics, she didn't do anything over the top gold metal good, but she knew how to do flips and lift herself up on branches (this gave her strength and flexibility). When Faye was 14 she was walking home (the hut) and went down an alley as a short cut, because the streets were crowded and she did not want to be pushed and shoved around people she did not know or liked. While she was lost in her thoughts she did not see the man in his mid 20's lurking in the shadows, as she walked past in a daze. Faye was suddenly pushed against the wall of the alley making pain go up her entire back, when she looked up to see who it was that had pushed her she saw a man much older then her, he had a hand over her mouth and the other wrapped around her, and he had all his weight on her so she couldn't move. Faye struggled to get free and then run as fast as possible, but he was stronger then her, but she didn't let up it only made her struggle more, the man laughed at her attempts and whispered in her ear huskily "Nice try sweetheart, but I want to have some fun tonight." that sentence made Faye's eyes widen to the size of plates, and tears formed in her eyes as the man snaked his hand up her shirt "No please, don't do this!" she cried trying her hardest to get him off, but he wouldn't. Faye screamed and cried as he raped her but nobody heard her or came to help her, she was alone. When the man let go of her Faye was broken, she didn't even want to look at him or herself for that matter, and when she got back to the hut (which was at 1:35am) stumbling and shaking, she cried and cried more then had in her entire life, she eventually cried herself to sleep that night with nightmares that she would have every night from then on. When the war came Faye had fled the hut and went to the woods, we're she felt most safe, she figured if they came to find her that she might as well be in her own territory. And that's exactly what she did, she had only a few things in a back back and went into the woods, hiding in the trees and in the shadows. Faye also came across a Wolf in the woods, who showed her where a watering hole was, she named her Keta (pronounced Key-ta), and she now travels with her as a companion, who she liked more then people. She knew what to eat there, the fruits, the herbs, and the animals. The trees and forest became her home, the shadows became her safe place, and her powers
Lovelylife chapter 3 . 7/20/2012
Got another one! Hope you like him.

Name:Elijah Moor

Nicknames/Codenames:Monster, Dog, Beast... just to name a few/ No codename

Gender:Male

Age:Unknown but estimated about 30

Nationality:Unknown

Spoken Languages:English.

Birthday/Birthplace:Unknown/Unknown

Sexuality:Asexual

Apperance:Elijah is 6"9 feet tall and weighs over 160 lbs. He has a physical mutation that gives him a monsterous dog like appearance. He has bright yellow eyes with no pupils and he's covered in dark coarse fur. Elijah has a short tail, he has two ear piercings and a crooked tooth that pokes out of his muzzle.

Personality:Elijah is ornery at best, not really caring what others think of him, he spent so much of his life being judged and accused he got used to it. He's calm and aloof but when you get him riled up and angry it's hard to get him calm down. Elijah holds a lot of grudges and won't forget what others done to him for a long time.

Beliefs:Atheist

Weapons:None

Skills:He's a vicious fighter and a good scavenger/hunter.

Power:Elijah has super strength and acutely tuned senses. He has the power to camoflage himself into shadows and has minor invisablitiy uses his blunt claws also.

Weakness:Elijah has the tendency to "lose" himself to his more animalistic side in battle and so can become a danger to himself and others.

Secrets: He does'nt keep secrets, he just does'nt talk much of his past and instead deals with the present.

Allies:Whoever, he does'nt like to be particaly close to anyone.

Enemies: Whoever manages to get on his bad side, humans

Group:He's more or less tied to the Sewer Rats but sometimes he wonders off on his own.

How he found/ joined the group: He was asked to join for protection, in turn they give him food.

Position in Group:He's the "brute" muscle of the group.

Romantic Intrests:Elijah is asexual, he is'nt intrested at in either of both sexes and is not looking for anything anytime soon.

History:Never knew his parents and his mutation was noticable at birth and so was taken to the government for testing. Luckily he escaped and been roaming around on the run ever since, until he meet the groups.

Good/Nuetral/Evil: He's in the dark grey area.

Views:He does'nt care for mutants and cares even less for humans, he was mistreated by both so what does it matter. He thinks the war is a waste but silently likes the bloodbath since it helps his more violent side calm soomewhat.

Clothing:Wears a simple pair of pants and that's it.

Possessions:None

Are you ok if I kill the character , put them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes to them? Sure.

Anything else I need to know about them?: Elijah usually walks around on all fours most of time and hunts and eat raw animals if food get scarce.
A-Rog chapter 3 . 7/20/2012
Name: Alexander Rogers

Nicknames and/or code name: Alex, Dynamo

Gender: Male

Age: 20

Nationality (include accent if any): American

Spoken languages: English, Russian, Spanish

Birthday and Birthplace (I dont mean what hospital or if they were born in a f*cking toilet, I mean state or country): Buffalo, NY, USA. May 17

Sexuality: Straight

Appearance ( include height, weight, hair color and style, skin color, eye color, body build, facial features and anything extra like scars, tattoos or piercings, or physical mutation if any, I think you get the point now): 6'4", 200 lbs, lean and muscular, extremely pale skin, dirty blonde hair down to his shoulders pulled back in a ponytail, dark green eyes, tattoo of a Polish falcon on the inside of his right forearm.

Personality: He's very dark and quiet most of the time but has an extremely sarcastic and funny side to him that comes out when he's with close friends. He is very stubborn and has a tendency to clash with people who are deemed superiors. He tends to think logically and tries to make informed decisions rather than impulsive ones.

Beliefs: Agnostic leaning towards Buddhism.

Weapons (if any, be realistic, they aren't gonna have a grenade launcher and lazer guns): None

Skills (beside their power, include fighting style): Brawler type of fighter. Talented singer (tends to sing in a lower ranger), plays guitar.

Power: His body converts caloric energy into highly efficient potential energy. This energy jumpstarts his immune system and his ability to heal (giving him a healing factor). It also regenerates his brain synapses to the point where he doesn't require sleep (making him the perfect watchman). He can also use this energy destructively but it tends to weaken the other aspects of his powers.

Weakness (power weakness and other weaknesses): Has to carefully budget his energy usage or he weakens and becomes less effective. His body will also break down in extreme cases. Other weaknesses are his temper and his stubbornness.

Secrets: That his parents are anti-mutant rights activists.

Allies: Not quite sure what you mean but I'm going to guess people he can relate to.

Enemies: Generally authority and his parents.

Group (include at least two you'd prefer them to be in but I will have the final decision): Sewer Rats would probably be it due to age but if you like the character and think he would fit in better, he'd probably fit well into Bandits.

How they found/joined the group: Just happened to stumble across them while moving through life and hasn't moved on yet.

Position in group (ie: infirmary, weapons (teaching and making), guard and/ or look out, brute (defense, could teach the younger ones to fight), scout (goes out and collects resources). not all groups will have every one of these so choose two or give me one you come up with): Guard and Scout are his two best positions due to his powers

Romantic interests (don't give me a specific person give me a type of person or an example, your character may or may not have a love relationship) : The type of person he relates to is the girl who is quiet and often times overlooked by others. He's afraid of making a commitment though so it would have to be someone who is extremely patient.

History (include before the war, maybe a bit about their family and how they found the group they are in if they are in one): Alex's grew up in a relatively normal childhood despite the fact that his parents were extremely religious Catholics with hard anti-mutant sentiments. Upon learning that he was a mutant he tried to hide it from his family. His powers emerged during a street hockey game where he took a puck to the face and the gash closed quickly. When he turned 18, he defied his parents and refused to go to college, instead moving far away to Las Vegas. After the war started he moved out of Vegas and has been living life on the road in an attempt to stay under the radar of his family which has now risen to the head of an anti-mutant group.

good/evil/neutral: Good with leanings toward Neutrality.

Views (how do they view the world as it is, what do they think of the war and how do they view mutants and/or humans): Alex is not a fan of world in its current state and is very opinionated on how to change it. He has finally accepted himself and just does not understand why others can't accept him as well. He is not a fan of the war but believes that it is necessary for the betterment of mutant kind.

Clothing (not just one outfit, give me a general idea and maybe a few examples): He tends to wear very basic clothes, usually jeans and a t-shirt or jeans and a hoodie. He has a pair of black Doc Martens which he is always wearing.

Possessions (what do they travel with ie: a backpack with a few changes of clothes, a bit of food, a water bottle.. etc. They are not going to me carrying makeup and hair products or laptops and game boys, be realistic. Also include anything they carry on their person): He has a backpack with a few items of clothing and is always found with a book, usually one that he has picked up out of the trash or stolen from a store. Other than that he doesn't really have anything of value.

Are you ok if I kill the character , put them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes to them? That's fine by me, I'd prefer you didn't kill him but it's your story.

Anything else I need to know about them?: Nope, if you think you need more just ask :)

Give me a few plot ideas that I can use with them (optional): Utilize his parents as villains, that could be very useful down the road. Also, explore his growing discontent with humanity and his willingness to become more violent to survive (I've been watching The Walking Dead haha). A third plot line is a lighter one but you could explore a romantic relationship in this hard world.
Lovelylife chapter 3 . 7/20/2012
Name:Caroline Taylor

Nickname/Codename:None/Scales

Gender:Female

Age:9

Nationality:African American

Spoken Languages:English and little bit of Spanish

Birthday/Birth Place:August 14/ Texas

Sexuality:Heterosexual

Apperance:Caroline is tall for her age but she is frequently called a shorty by those older than her and she's a little scrawny. She has black afro puff styled hair,dark brown eyes and dark brown skin. She also has gap teeth. Because of Caroline's mutation she's developed hard rough scales that appears in patches all over her body but most noticable on her hands and feet (she does'nt wear shoes) which curl into long claws.

Personality:Caroline is very shy, even around people she's familar with. She wants to blend in the background and hates to be in the center of attention. She's more comfortable around other mutants with phsyical mutations like her. Because of her reptile like mutations Caroline is very self-conscious about herself and gets a little jealous whenever she see a mutant that looks perfectly "human". It bothers her when people call her by her codename "Scales" but she does'nt make a move to correct them about for some reason. She's also easily impressed.

Beliefs:Her family rasied her as Christian.

Weapons:Her claws, but she does'nt really know how to use them offensively.

Skills:She knows a little ballet but thats 's double jointed and can track down people with her sense of smell.

Power:Caroline has a reptile like phsyical mutation, she has claws on both her hands and feet and a acute sense of smell. She has enhanced reflexes and is currently growing sharper teeth. Caroline also has hard rough patches of scales on her back, hands, feet,and neck. She also has thermal vision.

Weakness:She has a low tolerance for cold and once even went into a state of hibernation when it was too cold for her to she's also just developing her fangs she sometimes cuts her lips and tongue on has poor eyesight and is in need of glasses.

Secrets:Not a secret but she's has a deep fear that her mutation will completly turn her into a monster lizard.

Allies:Jones, The Sewer Rats.

Enemies:People who make fun of her and others in a bad way.

Group:The Sewer Rats

How she was found/joined the group: Caroline joined because she knew that in order to survive you need strength in numbers and so stalked/followed the group until she was accepted gradually.

Position in the group:She can serve as the look out during nighttime related missions. Also as a tracker.

Romantic Intrests:Though she is young, Caroline always thought about settling down with a laid-back type of guy who would always think she is beautiful no matter what.

History:She came from a low class family from Texas, she ran away when found out she discovered her scales and along the way met Jones, the two traveled together but went off to join different groups.

Good/Nuetral/Evil:More or less neutral.

Views:She thinks the world is a dangerous and messed up place and she just wants to get out of the way before she gets hurt.

Clothing:Not much, she has a dirty oversized shirt and some pants and underwear and unless someone kind enough donates clothes to her, thats all she wears.

Possessions:She has some bands to tie her hair into puffs, and a small purse where she keeps small "treasures" she finds and extra food.

Are you ok if I kill the character , put them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes to them?: Go ahead.

Anything else I need to know about them?:Nope.

Give me a few plot ideas that I can use with them (optional): You can have some character teach her how to fight or something like that.

Name:Marian Jones

Nicknames/Codename:Really perfers to be called Jones/Blitz

Gender:Male

Age:10

Nationality:Bi-racial, his mother is Mexican and his father is Caucasian.

Spoken Languages:Spanish and English. Has a slight accent.

Birthday/Birthplace:July 8/Texas.

Sexuality:Heterosexual

Apperance:Jones has a short and stocky build, he has short black hair and dark tanned skin and super light brown eyes. If you look closely you can see that he gives off a slight "glow". Jones wears shades.

Personality:Jones has a outgoing (and to some annoying) personality. He can't sit still and loves to show off his powers to anyone that might be intrested (or not). He's a stark contrast to Caroline but the two seem to be friends, he wishes that she would get out of her shell often though. Jones is also very optimestic and loves to talk and be heard.

Beliefs:He's Catholic.

Weapons:Jones prides himself for having a pocket knife.

Skills:He also knows how to hot wire and drive a car.

Power:Jones has light based powers. He can create beams of light, usually a searingly bright white color. He mainly uses them defensivley as a distraction or for entertainment. If he concentrates hard enough the light would turn hot and burns. As a side effect of powers, Jones' body has a slight glow-like aura.

Weakness:Because he can glow Jones makes an easy target in the dark and it takes forever for him to concentrate hard enough for his light powers to do any damage to an uses his powers frequently so he has to wear shades to keep him from going blind. He's also allgeric to peanuts.

Secrets:He does'nt want anyone to know his actual name Marian.

Allies:The Bandits, Caroline.

Enemies:Humans (the bad ones mostly), whoever tells him to shut up repeatedly.

Group:The Bandits

How he found/ joined the group: He felt that the group fit more to his likeing,he always been on his own anyway, except when he and Caroline travled together.

Position in the group:He acts as a diversion.

Romantic Intrests:In the future he would like to be with someone who is a wild and fun loving as he is, also someone who can cook really well.

History:Jones is your average run of the mill orphan street rat that found out that he had powers and traveled around to find to some action. He met Caroline sometime during his travels and decided to take her underneath his wing for awhile until they joined off to different groups but the two still keep in touch from time to time.

Good/Nuetral/Evil:You can't really call him evil but sometimes his actions can be a little "misguided". Jones is more of nuetral overall.

Views:Jones in the past had some trouble with humans before and mainly just stays far away from them if they look like bad news. Jones thinks that the world is an intresting place and hopes that once the whole war is over and if he survives he'll like to travel.

Clothing:He wears faded shirts (or no shirt if it's hot) and some pants. He scavenges around in search for more clothing since he's running out.

Possessions:None of any importance.

Are you ok if I kill the character , put them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes to them? Yes.

Anything else I need to know about them?:Nope.

Give me a few plot ideas that I can use with them (optional):Can't really think of one right now.

Feel free to use these two kid characters if you want!

Lovelylife
Guest chapter 3 . 7/19/2012
Ok I kno Angela is still a little rough around the edges but she could be a realy great charater. Please reconsider placeing her in your story this realy would make my year. You can put her in whatever group you want. Sry for beging but please.
From Dixi with Sweet-tea
Hylander McLeod chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Name- unknown
Codename- Enigma
Power- Erases memories. (erased her own by accident when triggered)
Gender- female
Age- unknown (appears 12-14)
Nationality- unknown (see powers for explanation for this and all other unknowns)
Spoken Languages- English, unknown if any others
Birthday- unknown
Place of Birth- unknown
sexuality- too young to know
skills- sneaking around, evasion/hiding, running away, self preservation
weakness- pretty much anything non power-wise , everything but telepathy power wise
Allies- none
Enemies- anyone who tries to attack/harm her
Group- Bandits (preferably), none if otherwise
Joined/Found- simple run-in
Romantic Interest- no attachments of any kind
Group Position- recon
History- unknown (see powers)
Good/Evil/Neutral- neutral
Personality- total introvert, looks out for #1, unconcerned with everything else
Views- don't hurt me we'll get along fine. Try to hurt me and you'll end up like me (total amnesia, irreversible and no way to determine source or cause
Clothing- skin-tight leathers, any condition (mostly ripped and torn. almost always wears a bandana and has black tape wrapped around her hands (the kind used to wrap around wires to prevent sparks)
Possessions- knapsack with a few gadgets (spy camera, binoculars, com link, lock pick, the likes).
weapons- pretty much none if don't count possessions
secrets- how she lost her memories.
appearance- rather slim , about 5' (maybe slightly less), 115 lbs, grayish-green eyes, wild black hair, bruises on upper legs and arms, black markings above and below eyes, missing two teeth (upper left and bottom right)
Guest chapter 2 . 7/19/2012
Um here's mine I'd want her to be a majr charecter but You can do with what you will.

Name:Brandi Miller

Codename:Chrysanthemum(it's a flower with virtualy no sent. also caled mums or chrysanths. it means 'truth')

Gender:Female

Age:17

Nationality:Whit/Italian

Languages: English and neaarly fluent in Italian but not quite

birthday/place:March 1st Oakland California

sexuality:Straight

height:5'5"

weight:120

hair: Dark Auburn Shoulder length

Skin:light Olive

Eyes:Dark green

Body:Slim but not overly so. Made for speed not force.

Attitude: She's a realist. She dosen't see the point in seeing the good side of things or the bad, she'd rather see the whole picture. For her the glass isn't half full or empty, it's just a glass of water.

Personality:She's very sarcastic, maybe overly so. But she uses it to try and lighten the mood every now and again, other times just because she's used to it. She's lso a bit of a smart ass. And has a strange fetish for Factoids. She'll say random facts every now and then (i.e. did you know that forigeners used to think english speakers were evil? I's because we use so many S's in our langusge we sound like we're hissing...no you didn't need to kno that but I said it anway.)

Beliefs:survival of the fittest nothing more nothing less

Weapons:She uses the seeds in her pouch to create what she needs at that moment, within reason ofcourse. (poison darts, vine whip, giant tree. you never know when you might need a giant tree.} Use's tae kwhan doe and adds street fighting into it.

Skills:Can use herbs for emergancy firdt-aid not a healer though she just helps the process along.

Power:She can controll plants. Growth, change genetic information, movement.(she can make humoid plant things for instance. but only to at the most and he current time limit is one minute for each.)she's connected to the plants around her (not literaly) and can sense changes in the vibrations of the ground because of it. She tends to ignore those though because she thinks she'd get to paranoid eventually.

Weakness:Fire hams he plants alot, power cut by 1/4 at night because plants ilt in the darkness,herslef. She's gone overboard with her power onc and she dosent want it to happen again. so she holds back.

Secrets:She killed he father when she was 12. Hates the fact that she did and vowed to master he powe becuse of it.

Allies:Just her group

Enemies:Anyone who decideds to hurt her group, they may not be overly close but they're all she has left now.

Group(s): Bandits Alphas

Romantic intrest: someone who can handle her sarcasm and throw it back at her.

History:She was ten when she found her power. she ad planted an apple core in her back yard and in less then a minute there stood a tree. her parents refused to have a freak in the family so her father put her in the car and drove off. evetually them came to some dense woods. Her father told her to wait there and that he'd come back later. He never did. Two years later she saw him again, she let her anger get the best of her and he was dead at her feet withn seconds. She met her group a year later, it took awhile before she ever actually spoke more than a sentence but eventually she opened up a little to them.

Views: She thinks Humans are just scared and hopes that there's still good in them, but this hope shrinks everyday. She hates the way the orld is now and wishes that somehow she could just make it better.

Blouse, light jeans, black converse

shirt green sweatshirt jeans sneakers

shirt green shoes black jeans

Possesions:The simple Backpack combo XP But she also keeps the ring her father gave her on her ffth birthday. she keps it on a chain around her neck.

You can do whatever ou want with her, kill her off steal her 'V' card I dont care...but if she dies please dont make it lame-

Plot Ideas:well, she knows a lot about poisons, it'd be pretty easy to fake her own death, or someone elses.

I really hope I did a good job with this. XD
EsaEnai chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Name: Devon Sullivan

Nicknames and/or code name: Beau calls him Dev; his code name is Pusher or Delta.

Gender: Male

age: 22

Nationality (include accent if any): His father was English, but he has no accent.

Spoken languages: English, and he's fluent in French (he and Beau speak to each other in French), German, Italian, and is learning Chinese.

birthday and birth place (I dont mean what hostpital or if they were born in a f*cking toilet, I mean state or country): Born in New York, on December 15.

sexuality: Straight

appearance ( include height, weight, hair color and style, skin color, eye color, body build, facial features and anything extra like scars, tattoos or piercings, or physical mutation if any, I think you get the point now): Basically, he looks like Jean-Luc Bilodeaux, in this picture:

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He always has a smirk on his face, and his hair is always standing on end. His eyes are a weird reddish-brown and they go all red when he's Pushing. He's 6'2, and I'm not sure about weight but he has well-defined muscles. The "D" is on his left cheek.

Personality: Devon is a psycho. He enjoys breaking bones, blowing things up, and messing with people's minds. He's the kind of person who, when controlling a guard, will make them smack themselves around while asking "Why are you hitting yourself?" while giggling. He has a morbid sense of humor and acts a lot like Pyro- never standing still, never planning. His romantic tendencies are a lot like his life- rough, and ruthless. He and Beau will yell for an hour and then he'll just tackle her to the ground and they'll be "otherwise engaged" for an hour. Its a very unhealthy relationship. I'd like a scene in there where shes talking to Enzo and they're getting on well, she just finished his tattoo and in strides Devon, who lifts her up into his arms and starts violently making out with her.

Beliefs: Humans are funny, and make good playthings.

Weapons (if any, be realistic, they aren't gonna have a grenade launcher and lazer guns): He has a big knife strapped to his waist.

skills (beside their power, include fighting style): Running, he's very strong, and he has a lot of energy.

Power: Puppetry, or as he calls it, "pushing". He can manipulate people's mental and physical functions to make them do whatever he wants. People being affected have two tell-tale signs: their eyes glow red and their movements and voice are jerky and sudden- like they're being pushed.

Weakness (power weakness and other weaknesses) : Telepaths can block his power with little difficulty. He has a bad temper and is bad at strategy.

secrets: None. This guy over-shares.

Allies: Medusa

Enemies: Everyone else.

Group (include at least two you'd prefer them to be in but I will have the final decision): Medusa- Delta.

How they found/joined the group: He actually tracked them down.

Position in group (ie: infirmary, weapons (teaching and making), guard and/ or look out, brute (defense, could teach the younger ones to fight), scout (goes out and collects resources). not all groups will have every one of these so choose two or give me one you come up with): Brute, and goes Scouting with Beau and Enzo.

Romantic interests (don't give me a specific person give me a type of person or an example, your character may or may not have a love relationship) : Beau, and any woman who will have him. He used to hire a lot of hookers

History (include before the war, maybe a bit about their family and how they found the group they are in if they are in one): Grew up in an orphanage, as no one was too interested in adopting a psycho. He devoted himself to language, finding it interesting and teaching himself to speak various languages. Powers activated at fifteen- he was getting beaten up, and pushed the bullies to beating on each other- almost to the point of death. He took off at eighteen, living on his own and pushing people into giving him money and buying him stuff. After hearing news about Pandora and her growing team, he used news reports and police broadcasts to track her down. Beau, who was lonely and heartbroken after the death of Drake, immediately latched to him. They've been doing their dysfunctional dance ever since.

good/evil/neutral: Evil

Views (how do they view the world as it is, what do they think of the war and how do they view mutants and/or humans): Black and white. Mutants? Good. Humans? Stupid.

Clothing (not just one outfit, give me a general idea and maybe a few examples): He likes leather, stripes, and metal. Always has stuff like that on his clothes. He also has a flair for the dramatic, so that factors in as well.

Possessions (what do they travel with ie: a backpack with a few changes of clothes, a bit of food, a water bottle.. etc. They are not going to me carrying makeup and hair products or laptops and game boys, be realistic. Also include anything they carry on their person): A collection of knives, a piece of wood that he whittles when he's bored, a lighter, some cigarettes (he'll split one with Beau when they're bored), a water bottle.

Are you ok if I kill the character , put them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes to them? Yes, yes, yes.

Anything else I need to know about them?: He likes to smoke and drink, and has a lot of random pieces of wood and nails in his room. He uses the excuse that hes making puppets, but Beau says he just likes sawing and nailing stuff.

Give me a few plot ideas that I can use with them (optional): I think you have a pretty good idea.
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