Reviews for Hurt
the cantarella of odile chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Midori, this is stunning. Your writing is really, truly powerful. I can't believe I haven't read anything of yours up until now; needless to say, I'll be raiding your profile for more gems like this. Awesome work : )
poke-girl9087 chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
ok i cant not explain how much i wish i could get back on my fan fic acount just to favorite this it is beyond words simply amazing. i loved reading this and ill probaly reread this in the future.
BlazingKaiogra chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
This was hauntingly beautiful. I loved what you did with the italics and bold; it really to the mood. And your wording was perfect. I really enjoyed this piece. Keep up the good work! .
Emerald Ashes chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
That was pretty damned disturbing, in an oddly beautiful way. Your use of italics really added to the piece. They drew the eye to the right places and emphasized the repeating ideas. Honestly, this doesn't even have to be fanfiction. Perhaps the inspiration lay in Pokemon and its characters, but the piece itself can stand alone.

Thank you for writing this.
Conway's awesum chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
woah,that's deep.