Reviews for Bitter UNIONS
busty-cutie chapter 1 . 7/14
wait ch 9 is danny giving part of his powers to sam and tucker?
busty-cutie chapter 1 . 7/12
IT kinda unreal how easily Danny's parents let him go by himself 100s of miles away alone with someone they knew 20 yrs ago
busty-cutie chapter 2 . 7/12
i like how danny back talks but still written really well screams and begs instead of acting tough when the time comes
jane chapter 2 . 7/30/2015
Hello my name is jane from holand i know a spell caster who helped me when i had problem with my husband if you need a right place to solve your problems contact Dr Otabor udo SPELL TEMPLE is the right choice. he is a great man that have been casting spells with years of experience. he cast spells for different purposes like

(1) If you want your ex back.
(2) if you always have bad dreams.
(3) You want to be promoted in your office.
(4) You want women/men to run after you.
(5) If you want a child.
(6) You want to be rich.
(7) If you need financial assistance.
(8) If you can't satisfy your wife sex desire due to low erraction.
(9) if your menstruation refuse to come out the day it suppose or over flows.
(10) if your work refuse to pay your, people owing you?.
(11) solve a land issue and get it back.
(12) Did your family Denny you of your right?
(13) Let people obey my words and do my which.
(14) Do you have a low sperm count?
(15) Case solve E.T.C
free to contact him at
tjw242 chapter 17 . 10/1/2014
Man, this story is incredible :D
Thankyou for writing and posting it, and an infinite well done! There were too many parts that I absolutely loved for me to pick one and complement you for it ;)
As ConCrit, all I can say is a few typos (but, we're all human) and the lack of questions marks when needed. The plot, though, made up for those tenfold :)
Thanks for writing, I can't wait to check out your other stories :3
tjw242 chapter 15 . 10/1/2014
Great ending :)
I'm liking it a lot how you're not only incorporating episodes, but Vlad's influence on everyday occurrences on Danny.
Well done :3
tjw242 chapter 8 . 9/30/2014
Daym, Danny's parents thinking its teenage angst was brutal... But good to read :D
This is an incredibly enjoyable story and I'm so glad it's so long. Can't wait to see what happens next :3
tjw242 chapter 4 . 9/29/2014
I really did not see that coming.
I'm kind of speechless.
I'm gonna keep reading now.
Good job!
tjw242 chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
Awesome start, this chapter being so long is awesome and you've made the perfect setting for a great story. Can't wait to see what happens later :3
Nyala Kurta chapter 10 . 4/5/2014
Sam and Tucker are about to experience what Danny went through: unspeakable amounts of pain and terror that comes with getting shocked by who-knows-how-many volts and who-knows-how-much ectoplasmic energy.
Nyala Kurta chapter 6 . 4/4/2014
Oh, Danny. I know what Maddie called you. She called called you an 'odd manifestation of ectoplasmic energy and post-human consciousness'. Only she kind of said that all in one breath...and kinda fast.
Nyala Kurta chapter 2 . 4/3/2014
Oh, Vlad just really:
•gets my goat
•grinds my gears
•ruffles my feathers
•generally irks the fucking hell out of me!
CallMeFreakFujiko chapter 9 . 1/17/2013
I squeed a little inside when I read "Madison," considering that I live like, ten minutes away from there by car. X3
Don't... Don't come looking for me... 'Not saying that you actually would, buuuut...
CallMeFreakFujiko chapter 2 . 1/8/2013
I really like this story so far, but something's been bugging me, ever since I read the sentence mentioning this.

With the "Little Badger" nickname, I never thought it was a weird nickname because I live in Wisconsin, and it's obvious that Vlad's a football fan.

The Wisconsin College football team is named "Wisconsin Badgers." You can't go into a store without seeing the famous badger in Wisconsin... Or a cow. Stupid stereotypes.

So um, yeah. Fact for the day!
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