|Reviews for Naive|
| NeverGoodbyeRoxas chapter 2 . 1/18
One of the best introductions I've read. Great, imaginative description combined with honest characterizations make for a happy 's interference with the two girls' father was an unexpected way of showing exactly who he is to both the audience and the Dragonborn; it was lovely.
| Mae-Govannen chapter 21 . 11/12/2013
hmm.. this ending certainly leaves room for sequels! I read this story over the course of a week, mostly on my mobile, but I decided to wait to review until I had access to my laptop again, where I can really give my feedback without the restrictions of a tiny, dinky phone screen.
very well done, I rarely read fan fiction anymore, because I've grown so tired of it. I enjoyed every minute of your story, and I wish there had been more! haha, but it was very well written and interesting, I enjoyed reading the relationship between Erik and Siona, it was very genuine and not terribly stereotypical. I loved the plot twist with Erik joining the Stormcloaks, I didn't see that one coming!
10/10 would recommend
| Talking to My Shadow chapter 21 . 9/29/2013
Oh great! Now I'm crying! And I never cry! That was amazing, I give you a much-deserved round of applause!
| peanuts chapter 21 . 7/30/2013
Pack your bag kids...we going on a feel trip.. :'(
THIS STORY WAS SO GOOD :(
If Skyrim was like this, the game would be so epic. But Bethesda gave us a half baked civil war... -_-
I loved it so much. You know theres a mod called Erik: Older and Wiser.
mods/36195/? I picture him to look just like that...OLDER AND WISER.
| artilyon-rand chapter 21 . 7/21/2013
WOW WHO WOULD IMAGINED THAT THIS WOULD END LIKE THIS? :)
| artilyon-rand chapter 13 . 7/21/2013
siona¡ there is no need to be rude¡ xD¡
| artilyon-rand chapter 6 . 7/21/2013
| artilyon-rand chapter 5 . 7/21/2013
Dragonborn eyah.. wow yoju are making a nice job here
| artilyon-rand chapter 4 . 7/21/2013
| artilyon-rand chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
| milgrom chapter 21 . 5/18/2013
This was fantastic. I began reading, wondering if I would finish and then got sucked into all of it. I love Siona, and your characterization of Erik. I loved the progression of both characters, the twining of the Civil War and the attention to detail. I wish I had better words, but simply put, this was amazing start to finish.
| Noblescar chapter 21 . 3/29/2013
A brilliantly well written and enjoyable story. I liked the epilogue in particular as you ended the story in such a way that almost all questions were answers. In fact, the only question that I have is whether the dunmer you mentioned is Karliah. Is she?
Favourited as I intend to re-read it again some time in a few months.
| RoseJaestyr chapter 21 . 3/21/2013
Well that was an interesting tale however I wont lie it definitely felt like it was going too fast at some point.
I feel like there were some periods that should have been touched upon a little deeper such as the civil war and the war with the thalmor they just seemed to come and go so quickly in the story and at some points it felt like plot points just sprung up out of no where such as the children.
All in all I feel like it was a good run but like I said a tad rushed which is understandable given your life at the time of writing and college and everything lord knows college does little to promote free time.
Anywho thanks for the read I look forward to another story by you if you plan on writing one.
| RoseJaestyr chapter 14 . 3/20/2013
Alright so I've read the fic up to this point and I have to say it's been pretty good.
I feel like I need to point this out. In all honesty the scene where Siona is beating the crap out of Erik just feels like a little much.
I was okay with the initial punch to the face that made perfect sense and I was even willing to go along with the second punch, but the knee to the gut and fierce uppercut? That my friend is going just a tad too far.
Other than that everything seemed pretty good I've enjoyed your writing thus far and hope to enjoy more in the future.
| Duinhiril Rinaruine Telcontar chapter 21 . 3/20/2013
AMAZING! (insert Skyrim theme here. See what I did there?)
I loved how you tied everything together and brought the sidequests into the story. I also loved how you played with the freedom fanfiction bestows, without me sensing anything overdone. Although, I spotted a few grammar errors but it didn't really affect me. :P
Man, to be honest I never really give reviews but I loved your work so much I just had to!
Keep up the good work! I hope you continue to do what you love! :D