Reviews for Price of Mischief
Saphira113 chapter 79 . 4/15/2014
Dark and lonely is an understatement for Aphrodite's uncle. And I appreciate that reference soooo much.
CraftyK13 chapter 5 . 4/12/2014
This is great so far! Exceedingly better than anything I could ever write. I'm trying to put together a Loki/Amora (Enchantress) fic but I don't think it's going to be as good as this one!
Splendiferous7 chapter 33 . 3/18/2014
Okay, wow, loving this so much. I've enjoyed all the regular doses of smut, but am glad there's more going on with the plot and the dialogue is just soooo great. I'm so excited that I'm not even a third of the way through this yet. Yay!
eustaciavye1 chapter 85 . 3/16/2014
Awesome action! Especially the part where Stark hearts Loki.
EmmalineTroy chapter 6 . 3/12/2014
Finished your story today. It was an amazing journey. I really enjoyed your version of Loki.
Kenna was a sweet but strong and brave character.

The story was sometimes a bit long and it took me 5 days to read it. I sneaked away to read at work on my phone

Thanks for your fantastic story!

Huyensmom chapter 45 . 2/14/2014
Fabio and Gothika are my favorite three words so far. I am loving this.
Hobbitherder chapter 2 . 1/29/2014
Just wanted to say this is my second read-through! I finished it several months ago, and still think it's my favorite Loki story. I love it! I'd forgotten just how well you portrayed the characters, both original and borrowed. :3
agaciaa chapter 93 . 1/19/2014
Thank you for your message, sorry I didn't reply before. I was going to, privately, but then I decided it's better if i leave a review after reading the whole thing. THIS. FANFICTION. WAS. AMAZING. You got me captivated (yes I read instead of studying, despite the fact that I have a fuckhuge test on Tuesday.) I'm pretty sure your Loki was one of the most IC Lokis I've ever read. When I read a Loki/OC ff it usually feels like I was reading a book about completely different people than those I've met in Marvel universe. Thank you for that 3 I want to mention the beautiful relationship between Thor and Loki you've created, as well. Gosh gosh goooshhhh, I'm going to get insane because of this bromance, and you wrote them so perfectly, I have absolutely no words and I WANT MORE. Thank you for giving me such a lovely way to spend my time :)
agaciaa chapter 14 . 1/12/2014
i started reading it this evening and honestly, i cant stop! you won my heart with this particular chapter, im absolutely in love with this. thank you so much for this story, you have no idea how much i enjoy it so far 3
A Nice Person chapter 69 . 12/27/2013
Okay, I was going to wait til the end to review but after this chapter, freaking screw it! When I started reading this morning my inner fluff lover was having an absolute fit, Loki was being a jerk 70% of the time and even more so in the smut department, and she was just taking it. I know she didn't really have a choice but that in itself was frustrating. Then he started with his borderline creepy obsessiveness and it sure sounded like she nearly fuck-zoned him for a while there. Finally they had some semblance of peace for a few summarized years and that was nice, and then he goes all psychotic mass murderer pseudo rapist and completely freaks out. At that point I had a growing respect for your characterization, as no one else I've read had really delved into just what happened to him when he had disappeared, and just how manic he was during his little world domination parade. I liked when he went to Asgard and the whole bit about Kenna taking care of him after his daily beatings; those must've sucked. But what really took the cake for me was that it wasn't til freaking chapter 69 that they say (and mean) the 'I love you's. Most nice little fluffy stories that I love to read and frolick in get those out within 10-20 chapters, not you, you waited til the absolute best possible moment whatsoever, the moment when it would mean the very most, and then they finally tell each other. Heck yes, you damn good writer. *fist pumps for emotional realism* You rock, and I'm sending you all my cyber cookies.
stalrua chapter 93 . 12/20/2013
Gah, I loved this so much! The angst well near killed me at times, but it was worth it in the end. I pass on so many stories with an OC because I find them hard to relate to sometimes, but Kenna was perfect. I loved getting to watch both Loki and Kenna grow throughout the story. And the way you wrote from all of the POV's... incredible. It's not easy to write that many characters.

It's amazing how you started this as something with more smut than plot and turned it into this. Fantastic, really. You did such a great job and I'm glad to have found this story!
Lady-Finwe chapter 93 . 12/19/2013
OMG this story is Fantastic, how you came up with this is beyond me, fabulous this is a masterpiece. :):):):):):):):):)
AnaBella1969 chapter 93 . 12/18/2013
I totally just shot through this story in like 3 days (no I do not have a life haha). But I absolutely LOVED IT! I think you should totally do a sequel though! Maybe one with just happiness and no pain? (is that too much to ask for?!) Or one with the Dark World in it...or a one-shot follow-up epilogue?! ANYTHING? PLEASE?! But seriously you're amazing and a really awesome writer!
stalrua chapter 14 . 12/15/2013
I've been reading this for the past couple hours and had to pause long enough to say how much I loved this chapter! And now I'll continue reading :)
Star-Lined Soul chapter 93 . 12/8/2013
Shamefully for myself as an author (how can you expect someone to review your work when you rarely review others' work? O.o), I don't leave reviews nearly as often as I should. I have to really connect with a story in order to find something to say.

That being said, this story is really, truly beautiful. It's taken me nearly a week to digest it entirely, but I'm so glad I took the time to do so. The way you have painted these characters is simply astounding. The way they grow, both together and separately, seems so fluid and realistic! It seems that typically when authors choose to center a story mainly around smut, attention to the emotions and mental states driving the smut is lost, but that is certainly not the case here!

I love how you portrayed Loki. After watching Hiddleston's brilliant portrayals of the character in Thor & The Avengers, as well as reading Loki's backstory given by the comics, I've truly begun to appreciate the depth of the character. The most tragic part of him is that he really thinks what he does is for the best! I love the way your story painted him in this light to begin with, as well as the idea of brainwashing to turn him into the villlan we see in The Avengers.

Gah! Did you really have to put Loki & Kenna through so much?! Your plot is an absolutely stunning construction in how it fits together so beautifully, but it still seemed like every time something went sour for them I was just like 'Come on, can't they have a break? Just a teensy one?!' Every step of their relationship just tugged my poor heartstrings in every direction.

I greatly appreciated the way you kept all of these other characters we love orbiting in the background, still present if not always the focus. It seems too many writers of any kind of pairing pull their characters to the forefront and scarcely fail to even mention the other characters that would most certainly be involved.

All-in-all, your dialogue and characterization are spot on and your abilities to pay attention to detail without bogging down the progression of events is to be commended. You've created a truly magnificent work here! Thank you so much for sharing it. :D

Lauren :)
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