Reviews for Price of Mischief |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh and by the way, that Chapter was brilliant - Loki deal to teach her Midgard ways is a clever way of extending her "torture". (I have to review here because I can't review twice on one chapter - tut) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm responding to your pre-chapter comments (can't focus on the story till I do). Please don't take the lack of reviews as a sign that readers aren't happy. If I'm anything to go by, I read stories without logging in and don't review every chapter anyway. But above all that, NEVER write your fanfiction for other people. Even if it had zero reviews, it would still be the same fantastic story - this fanfic is yours and yours alone, born out of the fertile imagination of your mind (and my God is it fertile!) - we are just people privileged to read it :-) OK Now I can enjoy your chapter x |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. Best Loki porn ever ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do not doubt chapter 9, it was wonderful! I didn't get a chance to review it because I read it at work on my phone :x I know I'm terriable, but when I saw the update notification email, I couldn't wait to read it! It was hot hot hot! And so was this chapter! I love the additional details to the "deal". I had wondered what she was going to do once she got there (that is if she ever leaves loki). Even thought of her selling herself on earth as well (sequal?). But loki being able to take her whenever and were ever he wants will just provide too many delicious chapters :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just found your story yesterday. I have to say it is one of the best I've read. Very well written. I really hope this will be a long story! Pretty please:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() More sexy time and a interesting plot...that's a story I can get behind! :P loki is so confident in the chapter and I about died when he asked for an oral exam! My husband is looking at me like I'm crazy now because one moment I'm staring intently at the screen and the next I'm laughing my ass off! Its the best again for updating so quickly, its awesome! :) |
![]() ![]() I absolutely love your story. C: It's very well written and a joy to read. 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) great story, im surprised u don't have more reviews |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hot chapter. For a second there, when Loki told Kenna look at him and she screamed, you left a small cligghanger there, i thought Loki went all blue and red eyes Frost Giant on her. Unwillingly, of course. Turned out she screamed for other reason;) |
![]() ![]() keep writingggg! love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a hot chapter! I can't imagine what's going to happen next... Confident, calm loki is the best loki. :) thanks for updating, can't wait for the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() well umm, I'm looking forward to more. That was ridiculously hot *fans self* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loki better make it worth Kenna's time! What is up with him not guaranteeing any pleasure? We all know there will be lots of it *wink* To dark Loki and puppy eyes Loki i prefer super confident and calm Loki. Like when he was in the cage in the Avengers. The entire time he was there i was drooling all over the screen. He is not sneering evilly nor he has teary eyes. He just looked like he was having a really good time toying with everyone. Such a BAMF! And the scene with Tony Stark was also cool. Thank you for saying my English is good:) okay and i am off to read 7th chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving the story so far! Hopefully its all worth it, but with loki you neverr know! Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, I don't really review, but I'll make an exception this time to let you know I appreciate your work and will be watching for future chapters. -avidreadercina |