That was one of the best fan fics I've read, and I've read a ridiculous amount . .. it's like my crack. LOVED this story.

*grumbles* Pathetic excuse for a sentient species... :l Where does this disdain come from before even the movie...? ;-; Why must the universe agree that humanity sucks?(including the humans) :p

...And so it begins.

Wew. Glad the human lady's okay. :P

I'd call you a bastard Loki, but that might hit far too close to home and get me blasted. XP (he's more of an arse, anyway)

"God" damnmit. Again(or really the first?) with the quim Loki? I googled it. DX' For shame Loki, not as classy as he lets on is he? :3 And oooh, someone craves the maiden's attentions a bit does he? :P

Oowup. Nevermind. Seems to have evened ou t a fraction. :p

She should take the "deal" I think. I mean, he's not at all ugly(on the outside), is on the classy side, and after she'd be free to do whatever for the rest of her long life. The benefits outweigh the risks and horrid long life with no breaks from that Fearar whats his face.

...Well that could've gone worse? /8P (or it's about to get worse...)

Oh Loki...you're a tease in such a bad way. :p (is HE gonna be cross/bitter when he learns she just wants a favor... 0-0)

Well there'll be plenty of work in Midgard for her. :P (but how to pay the toll...)

Is Kenna a Norse(Islandic?) name? Does it mean anything?
...Isnt Bjorn from that myth with Loki? XP

As much as I love this story, I really don't think Tony Stark curses that much. I swear there's been about 3 times where he hasn't dropped the f-bomb or some other profanity. Normally, i could care less about how a person goes about with their language, but seeing as he is already a well-round character who does not cuss very often, this particular detail just bothered me. Please don't take the time to try and go back to change the story, it's already so good, but just for future reference I wanted to put this out there.

By far the best chapter. Oh dear.

There is so many chapters! And this is only seventeen! What further plot awaits me?
Allons-y!

This chapter. Yes. Thank you. Humiliation and dub/con are hard to read sometimes, but I do love when the odds get evened. I am proud of your OC, and you have written then both very well.