Reviews for If You Will
Anon chapter 1 . 2/10/2016
The Paul is a total jerk has me hooked to read the story.
Just Somebody chapter 20 . 10/6/2013
This was horrible and hilarious at the same time. LOL None of this made any sense!
16amber chapter 20 . 10/24/2012
Well that was... different. Not what I thought it would be, but still good.
xxxRena chapter 20 . 10/15/2012
I know it they planned something horrible. But if Paul "loved" Anna so much how could he cheated on her and get Gaby pregnant?!Im glad Embry and Anna got their happy ending!
I loved this story!
xxxRena chapter 19 . 10/14/2012
Oh god! Im sure as hell it was Gaby and Paul plan to seperate them. But looks like Gaby wasnt determinalt as Paul was.
I cant wait for the next!Im so excited!
RebelxPunk chapter 18 . 10/13/2012
let her stay with paul!
BlueEyedCountryGirl chapter 20 . 10/15/2012
Another great story. I'm glad Embry and Anna are together. Can't believe what Paul and Gaby did to them though. But great ending!
ThereAreMuchWorseGamesToPlay chapter 3 . 10/15/2012
Awwwww! How sweet!
ThereAreMuchWorseGamesToPlay chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
Only thing I don't love is that I know Paul loses his temper alot, but I don't think he'd be a huge bully in school. I think you should have chosen a non-pack member for that. But I like the plot. Nice work
gabycaldemeraz chapter 20 . 10/15/2012
I am in SHOCK! i cannot believe you,of all people, have me hating on paul so much!

What a bastard! He was so evil! He had anna and he was having sex with his imprint! He had the everything he wanted while the rest of them had nothing :( sooooo selfish!

Oh max! You are such a great wroter and give us such amazing, different stories! I cant even be angry that you tainyed the imrpint love between gabby and Paul LOL.

Anyway, after all the crying, because i was crying right along anna when she was in the chApel doubting herself, and the anger at paul im super happy that embry and anna are finally together :)
gabycaldemeraz chapter 19 . 10/15/2012
Craaaazyyyyyy! Gosh, im a over the place!

What a sweet, sexy way of waking up to Paul and just him kissing abd touchibg abd having breakfast!
And he proposed! Omg! But it is really sad that she doesnt love him that way, :(, why did she accept? Its tOo soon anyway

So here is where i knew it was all wrong on a different level, tomorrow? He really doeant want to wait at all, OH PAUL! why!? Why did you do all of it? :(

I always knew embry was set up, but come on he could have asked for help from the pack, instead of them just turning their backs on paul and anna.. Uuugggh I feel so bad! Abd I still hate Gaby!
Wasipi chapter 19 . 10/14/2012
I really love all the twists you put in this story ) Can't wait for the next chapter!
BlueEyedCountryGirl chapter 18 . 10/14/2012
Great chapter! Love how sweet Paul is with her and i really like them together. I really hope Paul isn't behind whatever is going on with Embry though. Update soon.
gabycaldemeraz chapter 18 . 10/14/2012
Im am so happy and excited for them! Terribly happy!

Paul is perfrct, so gentle and loving. I LOVE how he yreats her, touches her, kisses her..

Im terrified that he will be broken hearted or that he is tge bad guy in this atory :(
wolf lover of michigan chapter 17 . 10/12/2012
Update soon, awesome chapter
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