Reviews for Carter The Adventure Begins
AlietteJay.Mwah.X chapter 111 . 2/2/2013
THIS WAS AMAZING! Omg! You really are an incredible writer! I loved reading this!;D ..I read some when ever I had the spare time!:) So sad its over:( I really wanted a cutw Carchelle scene..But this was still amazing, none the less..Im defiantly taking a look at your other fics xx
AlietteJay.Mwah.X chapter 68 . 2/2/2013
Urrm, what's wrong with Peter? Its much safer for Carla to drive, he's ill, he cud collapse, or go unconscious..And I'm scarded of what I'm about to read..Great fic loveing it xx
AlietteJay.Mwah.X chapter 62 . 2/2/2013
See more of our sarcastic Carla!;) "If Jim wants to play games then bring it on, two can play, and I play dirty. Always have." And "...And I've met some seriously twisted people, hell I've had intimate relationships with them" I'm glad you've kept her humour in this:) I'm really enjoying this fic, in my top 3 I've read. You are such a talented writer! (Hey, fancy helping me with my English GCSE?;) lmao) I'm so intruiged in this fic..xx
AlietteJay.Mwah.X chapter 61 . 2/2/2013
I love the sarky humour you give Carla!;) "I don't know Jim, maybe because I'm lying" And "I feel like a dog. What's he going to order me next, sit? Roll over? Or maybe his favourite play dead?" Haha, bless her, she's still a sarcastic bitch, even when she's scared;) Your an incredible writer. Absolutely love this fic..Sorry for leaving practically the same review on every cchapter. Lol. ...Still think this should be a film;) xx
AlietteJay.Mwah.X chapter 59 . 2/2/2013
Omg! Is Peter really dead? Or are they lying? Poor Carla!:( ...Again incredible writing, love this fic xxx
AlietteJay.Mwah.X chapter 58 . 2/1/2013
Omg..I knew Jim was in the story somewhere, but he gave her that beating? No, don't want them together anymore..But seriously, what is wrong with him? One minute he's sweet and caring, next he's evil and vicious..Your an incredible writer and I'm so intruiged and doubt I'm gon get any sleep tonight, haha xxx
AlietteJay.Mwah.X chapter 57 . 2/1/2013
Grr, stupid Jim..Poor Carla..and what's gon happen to Peter?:/ ...again amazing writing, I so wish this was a film. Not just because I'm lazy and hate reading;) but bcuz it wud be insanely incredible!; D xx
AlietteJay.Mwah.X chapter 53 . 2/1/2013
Omg, is it bad that I like Jim and Carla, together?:O opps, I don't mean to its just, i do...I've said awwr at them a lot..and Peters just being a selfish c*nt as usual..I mean he seriously tries blaming Carla? Liike what the, ? Haha, your such an incredible writer:D this fic is beyond amazing..I'm just terrified that with it only being half way through, azarov comes back, or something bad..xx
AlietteJay.Mwah.X chapter 47 . 2/1/2013
Omg poor Carla! Omg this should so be a film! It'd be flamin amazing! Think it'd be one of the best films ya can get! With Alison King as Carla and then Chris/Peter and the road rage and all that! I love this fic! Its insane and so incredible! Love love love! Xxxx
AlietteJay.Mwah.X chapter 35 . 2/1/2013
Wait, she shot a man yes, a dangerous man, with a dangerous brother, but she saved Rafaels brother, they shud owe her, not the other way round..Your an incredible writer and I'm addicted to this fic..Failed my maths and science, yeh, thanks for that;) lol..I'm so intruiged. Amazing xxx
AlietteJay.Mwah.X chapter 15 . 1/31/2013
Grrr, your so mean!;) I have 2 exams tomorrow morning, for math and science and I can't flamin sleep 'cause your such a fantastic writer..This fic is incredible, I'm addicted! So
AlietteJay.Mwah.X chapter 12 . 1/31/2013
Omg! I hate you! Its almost midnight! And I keep telling myself "one more chapter then sleep, you can read more after school tomorrow" but I'm just so intrigued, and you end your chapter so great and I just have to keep on reading. I mean "they're not alone" what are you trying to do to me?;) I'm knackered, why do you have to be such an incredible writer? Haha, love this xx
AlietteJay.Mwah.X chapter 4 . 1/31/2013
Your an amazing writer but I think even when she's desperate and panicked Car has the brains not to call and shout. But its way tol early in the story for them to be found:( what has Peter done? Flamin idiot! Poor Car, she reli shuda done as the men said and stayed on the mooring..I can see this cud of gone two ways, she cudda stayed on the mooring and watch the boat drive off, go to the police, have leanne and maybe even rob say how Peters done a runner again and all that and the police trying to find him and what not, and Peter on the boat and this stuff happening but without Car..But the way youve wrote this is fantastic, I'm really intrigued, nothing bad to say about this fic. Yet;) noo, your an amazing writer, doubt they'll be anything worth criticising:) ..Anyway sorry for the massive review. Xx
AlietteJay.Mwah.X chapter 2 . 1/31/2013
What's going on? Has Peter got on the wrong side of his friend? I'm so intrigued..Your a great writer so glad there's like 100 more chapters:D xx
massivealikingfan chapter 111 . 12/6/2012
This was amazing. Can't wait until Carla is back on screen. 3 days! x
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