Reviews for Second Time Around
Phinoa chapter 22 . 2/22
Great twist with Rita! And I endorse of Hermione 's slowly discovering her feelings. I never liked Pansy in the original story, and I despise her here even more so. She is this one character that I will never consider likable, no matter how she is portrayed. With that in mind, I am glad you didn't make her into this whole new person but stuck to the terrible chit she is (to me, at least). So thank you, even though I find her obnoxious. I would love to read another chapter, but it's getting late and I've been reading all day. So longPhinoa
Phinoa chapter 20 . 2/22
Oh Hermione... That was one hell of a ride. You write so well it makes me feel all the tension between them, as if I were both of the characters, experiencing all of their emotions at once, and it's tearing me apart, in this slightly masochistic way, as I have mentioned before. I don't care if the chapter is cliché or not, it makes me want to read on, and that is what should count. Thank you for letting them clear a couple of things up!
Phinoa chapter 19 . 2/22
So much pain and then... at last some sort of closure! I feel giddy.
Phinoa chapter 17 . 2/22
Oh the whole jealousy theme is making me uncomfortable... I mean, I know it's necessary, sort of, but still. Wish they'd just talk it out! Remember Ron's reading of the tea leaves? "You're going to suffer, but you're going to be happy about it." That's how I feel about fanfiction, and fandoms in general. What am I doing to myself? I blame your engrossing story of course, no hard feelings :P
Phinoa chapter 16 . 2/22
Well, that is indeed a curious development. Now I'm seriously wondering how this is going to work out! Thank you for having written this!
Phinoa chapter 13 . 2/22
Oh my, that was... well... :D in lack of a good word: I am excited for fourth year. I mean.. some fluff is bound to go down, what with the Yule Ball etc. Thank you for this chapter, I loved it!
Phinoa chapter 10 . 2/22
I know this fic has been posted years ago, yet I still feel like commenting on each chapter. Hope it doesn't come across as spam, I just believe in credit where credit is due, regardless of when this was written. I have a slight notion of the form Draco's Patronus is going to assume
Phinoa chapter 9 . 2/22
Interesting twist with Buckbeak, I'm intrigued! Thanks again for another chapter
Phinoa chapter 8 . 2/22
Over 9000 words huh?I enjoyed the chapter even though a lot of it comprises JKR's writing, but I agree with you on the necessity of including these passages. I'm thrilled to move on to book 3! On that note, this feels kind of like a light reread of the original series, yet it's not a bad thing at all. Reading HP always puts me in my happy place, and good fanfiction has the same effect. So thank you!
Phinoa chapter 7 . 2/22
I just feel the need to say that I absolutely love the fact that you pick up on all the fun scenes which are exclusive to the books. Neville's leg-lock, the midnight duel, the Death Day Party, now the Valentine's Day delivery "cupids" and Ginny's card for Harry... and there is so much more. I am still waiting for Peeves :D
Phinoa chapter 5 . 2/22
I knew this was coming, but it was heartbreaking all the same. I do understand your reasoning, though!
Phinoa chapter 3 . 2/22
Of course friendship would be the appropriate kind of relationship! I am enthralled, you know. And I love the scorpion theme (I'm a Scorpio )
Phinoa chapter 1 . 2/22
Just found this and I am rather intrigued! Eager to find out what's coming next
Danigirl84 chapter 33 . 2/17
Great chapter! It was nice to see Theo getting to talk with other people. I hope he and Hermione get more interaction. And I enjoyed the talking doors. Although I've always wondered why no one ever asks them something super easy like, "what colors my hair?" The one who's telling the truth is the door to go through.
Lucy Gaol chapter 37 . 2/17
sort of wish Joana was Tonks if you're just going to throw in a random hufflepuff
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