Reviews for A Falling Star
Guest chapter 7 . 2/8/2015
are you going to make more?
Aviendha91 chapter 7 . 2/24/2013
This is really good story. I like the mix between sci-fi and the forgotten realms universe. I know it's been a few months since you added to this story, but keep going! what happens next?
KindredSpirit chapter 6 . 8/24/2012
This is an awesome story. Very unique story line, keep up the good work :)
Nelly chapter 3 . 8/1/2012
This is a really good story so far. Well penned XD
OhShirleyUJest chapter 2 . 7/25/2012
I'll admit that right now I'm about as confused as a lab with a laser-pointer, but it's a good confusion. The confusion has little to do with the writing, but everything to do with the intriguing crashing space dude and his flying 'pig'. I like that the plot seems highly original, and your writing seems smooth and mostly free of mistakes. It's really nice to see...

The one odd place was: 'as the man's visor lifted to regard him'

In that phrase, it seems like the visor has eyes... and a mind. But, that's really a tiny detail. Overall, you're golden! Thanks for posting, and I'll definitely keep a lookout for your next update!