Harry is making his portkeys go in straight lines, and is crashing into things as a result, isn’t he?

Ach, I see this has been abandoned for a decade, but should you return know that I thank you for what you have written

Ahah just saw that this was last updated in 2012 so ig my comment is irrelevant but the point still stands.

Authors always make Harry short but in the books I’m pretty sure he’s supposed to be decently tall. 5’10-6’0 it’s presumed. Tired of seeing people always make him so short.

Very imaginitive fic and with good writing to boot. Probably going against the grain here, but I like that you started Harry off as only average. If he was powerful from the get go this 5000 year story would be boring. Leaving room for growth keeps things interesting.

Also, this it totally irrelevant since you're likely to never see this or edit this fic, but when you wrote that Harry thought Mot sounded like mutt, it wouldn't have made sense. He's speaking in a different language after all. In ancient Egyptian, those words probably sound nothing a like. That's like saying "pregnant" sounds like "embarrased", which doesn't make any sense unless you're referring to those words in Spanish. Just a very tiny nitpick I found funny.

But overall, I'm even a bit glad this was abandoned. I don't think I could've dealt with Ahaneith dying as Harry kept aging. My poor ships never sail :')

This has been great, though. It really was lovely and brought back that feeling of awe when it comes to fantasy and worldbuilding.

Oh, this was very nice. Might have to watch Man from Earth now

great story

An yes, the quick update

I love the concept of this story, it's very nice

I'd like to see this fic updated more then any other I think, and I've read a probably unhealthy amount of stories on this site. Most interesting one I've ever come across. Thanks for it, by the way. Been hoping to see it updated for years

he has magic... 1 flame spell could take out all of those guards? why is he just a spineless little child? i hate fics like this, wimpy little harry knows hardly any magic at all, and is weak willed and lets people walk all over him. this could of been an amazing story.

I really truly love how this story is written, it's so vivid and Harry is completely in character. I am kind of devastated that it never went further than it is right now, but I'm grateful for what you wrote! Thank you so much.

Fucking enough of Harry being this useless pacifist who doesn't make the first move.

I hope one day you come back and add to this, this is a brilliant masterpiece

Have you forgotten that harry is a parselmouth!