|Reviews for One's Dream (Original and Discontinued)|
| tobidragneel117 chapter 10 . 9/14/2014
i cry ya know
| TrinTron chapter 5 . 6/21/2014
You should start writing on wattpad!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
i really want this one or the newer one to be updated
| Erasure15 chapter 4 . 1/22/2014
This is one of my favorite Naruto fanfiction stories! I hope you'll continue with this story someday.
| Cjhoax chapter 53 . 10/13/2013
| SkywardStrike chapter 44 . 10/11/2013
Usually i can predict your moves, Nisroc...Kabuto's appearance, the kid's attacks, Zetsu, 'Aradam'...but this? It was pretty Unexpected...and not in a bad way!
| SkywardStrike chapter 42 . 10/10/2013
Miso...he is my favorite from the group...i wonder what he can do...
| SkywardStrike chapter 39 . 10/10/2013
The dynamics between Sunako and Miso remind me a bit of Naruto and Hinata...except for her personality of course...
| SkywardStrike chapter 37 . 10/10/2013
God, for a minute there it thought Madara was really out...gladiador we will see him kick some ass!
| SkywardStrike chapter 34 . 10/9/2013
Wow! Things are geting good! Madara's arival was epic and it made me think... Who is the third guy? And why amegakure? Also, im curious on the kid's jutsus? Will there be rasengans and chidoris and gates? Only one way to know...reading on!
| SkywardStrike chapter 20 . 10/7/2013
WOW...Mizuki hás MS...? That was...unexpected...
| SkywardStrike chapter 18 . 9/17/2013
ITS MADARA! Who else takes his time with enemies like this?
| SkywardStrike chapter 17 . 9/17/2013
"You have to dance for it?"
Dance? No...no way...Madara Uchiha...?
| SkywardStrike chapter 7 . 9/17/2013
I KNEW the girl was Neji's daughter! Although in SC its a guy...and he's older...but im guessing its just because Neji died...
| SkywardStrike chapter 5 . 9/17/2013
Haha! I love Tobi the good boy! I dont know why you used him in Second Chances! ...then again SC is a different story with a different Tobi, a broken Tobi...i guess making him play around would be OOC...and now i get what you meant in your author's note in SC...the one that said you would make the ending of the bell test different...