Reviews for How He Fell
XxSparklesxxBrightlyxX chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Interesting, my brain hurts. Cool story.
SunnyZim chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
Beautifully written - loved it;-)
sablemerle chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
This is very well written.

"And...they're kissing. Rather, she's kissing him, and he's flailing around like a fish just thrown out of its nice, safe pond and into a frying pan. And River Song is hungry."

These two lines completely encapsulate The Doctor's reaction in that scene.
Snape's little Slytherin chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
This is really good! It's well written and true to character. Great job! :)
Dragonsbain chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
OMG. Wow! This is great.
Shaydees chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
Excellent! So true to character. Great job.
Morzan's Elvish Daughter chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
But he did ask!
"Are you married, River?"
"Are you asking?"
"Yes."
"Yes."
"No, wait, hang on. Did you think I was asking you to marry me, or, or, or, asking if you were married?"
"Yes."
"No, but was that a yes, or a *yes*?"
"*Yes*."
Citizenofwhoville123 chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
:) I just love the story of the Doctor and River, and this was beautifully written!
cmartlover chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Nice job! I liked how you relayed the Doctor's 'journey' with River, thusfar.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Wow. I just LOVEEEEED this(:
Any possibilities for you to continue this?
madis hartte chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
YES. YES. A THOUSAND TIMES YES. This is brilliant-all the awards.
notwritten chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
I like it. Keep smiling. :-)