|Reviews for Betrayal|
| KiltedBanshee chapter 1 . 9/15/2002
Good job! great psycholigical insight.
| Rookie-one chapter 1 . 9/8/2002
Yeah, I have no idea why that happened in my story. I'm going to edit it sometime, repost it. That should solve the problem.
Thanks for reviewing!
| Gilraen chapter 1 . 9/8/2002
nice fic rookie! Oh and the numbers - I say - Blame it on the website - dash those formatting gremlins to the floor!
I especially liked your portrayal of Vader here:
"Weak fools. He could sense their confidence both in the force and in their abilities.
Surely not even Vader could take on two Jedi at a time."
I'm not a major Star Wars fan, but I have seen the first (or should I say last?) three movies, and I know enough to follow the story.
Very well written, a few grammar checks, but nothing major.
| Chronos chapter 1 . 9/8/2002
Yeah, that was pretty good, but those numbers are really annoying! Get them fixed.
| SW Fan chapter 1 . 9/7/2002
Whats with the numbers in front of all your paragraphs? Its weird. An ok story.
| Setare chapter 1 . 6/24/2002
Nice story - and interesting way of telling it , too.