Reviews for Luscious Fire
Lilerds chapter 15 . 12/30/2012
I thought you had died or happy you didnt too,what would i do not knowing what was going to happen?Im freaking out inside because Cato has found Katnis!I wonder if he will kidnapp her...Anyways, i loved the update and i cant wait till the next chap.
Kato45 chapter 15 . 12/30/2012
Its amazing. I love it
Abigail25 chapter 15 . 12/30/2012
AMAZING! :)
thepinkmartini chapter 15 . 12/30/2012
Great chapter! So happy that Cato and Katniss saw each other again. Last part sounds bad though. Snow seems like he has an evil plan.
Toni chapter 14 . 12/27/2012
No omg yes! Great story line the characters work well TOGETHER
ZeipherFarnsworth chapter 14 . 12/21/2012
I've had this problem before and I can see its happened here as well. The thing is that in all the chapter you don't write who's POV it is (POV point of view) you change the point of view halfway through that chapter and I have to read for a little to figure out who's it is. There are some minor spelling mistakes and some wording that doesn't make sense, this is constructive reviewing and is based on some experience.
ZeipherFarnsworth
Guest chapter 14 . 12/21/2012
Please please please please please please please update update update update update uodate
Amy WilliamsPond chapter 14 . 12/16/2012
Please update I'm waiting been waiting for ever please
Kezzy1998 chapter 14 . 12/12/2012
Please update this is a great story and h love the different story line :) :)
primlyprincess chapter 14 . 11/30/2012
Please update soon! This is so good!
Guest chapter 14 . 11/24/2012
so saaaaaaaaaaad, aka i cried

upate sooooooon
Ciarainwonderland chapter 14 . 11/24/2012
Oh my god my feels..
Crying why is it so sad :( I hope they meet again :)
Kato45 chapter 14 . 11/21/2012
excellant. beautiful. just love it. i cried. it was amazing
smile.thats.all.you.need chapter 14 . 11/19/2012
The note from katniss made me cry. I hope you update soon!
toolazytologin chapter 14 . 11/19/2012
I love this story so much! Just wanted to say good job and keep I up(:
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