Reviews for Luscious Fire
BFCL chapter 2 . 7/26/2012
If the rest of the family does find out her secret will they be angry or tell other people? Update soon!
MorphlingInTheSoap chapter 2 . 7/26/2012
This story would be so awesome if you took more time to develop the plot and add more detail.

I love the idea of what you're trying to say- it's really creative and intriguing. Take your time and don't rush through the parts that are hard to write!
Thynerdgurl chapter 2 . 7/26/2012
I sense Cato has a little crush...then Again I think Eric does too...
FLOWERPOWER-NESS chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Please continue! I REALLY want 2 c what happens! HELP ME OUT!
Paige Mellark-Lynch chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
this is GREAT dont listen to criticism because they have it wrong and uh oh how will cato react i dont think hes as nice as his mom so...
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
please update soon!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Oh. My. Gosh. Please make more soon!
FireBreadandSnares chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
That is awesome!
Scarlet chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Wow this is very good so far! I have never seen a fic with her being an avox (except she can talk) and I'm really excited to see how she will get Cato to keep his mouth shut about her secret :D

Please update soon! This story has a lot of potential xD
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Thynerdgurl chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Love it! Please update soon, can't wait.
SweetxDecadence chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Ooo la la..
the.hungry.mockingjay chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
really good first chapter! cant wait to read the next.
saphire132 chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
You should continue this story. I really like it! Update soon!
sundragons9 chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
I liked it. Can't wait to see where you take it with how Cato will act/react, how he will treat her and all that wonderful stuff.
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