|Reviews for Sins of The Father|
| MagicWriterK chapter 17 . 4/21
I ADORE CLAUDIA I SWEAR THAT WOMAN IS SUCH A HERO.
And at last Dave sees the light. HURRY DIRK, HURRY!
I find it a tad surprising how the Striders have this vast amount of luck in your fanfictions. It makes for a rather pleasant plot twist, but it also means they would be done for if not for luck.
| MagicWriterK chapter 14 . 4/21
YOU MESSED WITH THE SHADES
YOUR STUFF IS WRECKED
| MagicWriterK chapter 12 . 4/21
Can I kill him now?
Can I please jump into the story and remove him from the equation? NOW? PLEASE?
| MagicWriterK chapter 11 . 4/21
YES let us bestow gifts of torches and pitchforks upon Derrick.
The hard way.
ALSO, DID NO ONE THINK OF SIMPLY CALLING THE STRIDERS. COME ON.
AND WHAT ABOUT THE BETA KIDS, DAVE? ARE YOU REALLY AS ALONE AS YOU BELIEVE?
| MagicWriterK chapter 10 . 4/21
Oh my gosh...this just took quite the dramatic turn...
I CALLED THE PART ABOUT BEING IN TROUBLE WITH THE LAW.
| MagicWriterK chapter 9 . 4/21
*slaps him* IT'S DAVE NOT DAVID GET IT RIIIIGHT!
I stick firm in my belief that Derrick wants Dave to inherit his tycoon. Or maybe Derrick is on the run...
OH YES ROSE LALONDE DO YOUR STUFF I swear I love that character. She's so smart/clever and sassy at the same time. This time her intelligence could be the key to saving Dave.
P.S. You may want to use the word 'dragged' instead of 'drug'.
| MagicWriterK chapter 8 . 4/21
"I guarantee you officer, if I saw that man lay so much as a finger on my baby, you would be arresting me for murder right now. "
Sounds like something I would say. ;)
What's Derrick's deal, anyway? Does he want Dave to succeed him when he retires from his business corporation? Or is his mental disorders just driving him off the deep end?
| MagicWriterK chapter 7 . 4/21
DERRICK STRIDER *punches*
YOU ARE *roundhouses kicks in the stomach*
THE MOST *uppercut*
DESPICABLE MAN *knee where it hurts*
I HAVE SEEN IN A LONG *elbow in face*
TIME! *kicks him off his feet*
| Shadow Hunter chapter 11 . 12/22/2014
A pitch fork? More like drop kick him off a 30 foot tall cliff into shark infested waters!
| foxfairie chapter 19 . 10/20/2014
get that son-a-bi***!
| foxfairie chapter 17 . 10/20/2014
| foxfairie chapter 16 . 10/20/2014
nooo! she was so close! poor claudia! poor dave! poor dirk!
| foxfairie chapter 15 . 10/20/2014
feel the rage dirk, feel the rage
| foxfairie chapter 12 . 10/20/2014
oh. hahaha! nevermind about my last comment on the phone calls... i just read the first section of this chapter. lol.
derrick needs to die and how can dave be so clueless? it's killing me!
| foxfairie chapter 11 . 10/20/2014
doesnt dave have any sense?! jeeze! and why doesnt dirk try to call him? or one of his friends... just..
sorry. it's a good story. i'm just getting into it a bit too much...