|Reviews for silent beauty|
| Lena Sauran chapter 16 . 12/15/2012
A good story of Ariel, save for the grammatical and convention errors, an enjoyable read.
| eagle219406 chapter 15 . 10/12/2012
Great chapter. I'm guessing that Viator is Ferdinand. I don't know who the principal is. I'm guessing that Yasmine is either one of Ariel's sisters, or she is Anna.
| eagle219406 chapter 14 . 10/5/2012
YOu need to fix this. I clicked on chapter 14 and it just gave a repeat of chapter 10.
| musicluver246 chapter 13 . 10/1/2012
i love this story, please update soon.
| random person chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Hey interesting premise i'll keep reading, looks promising.
Only one little detail you say that the girl has "hyperthermia" and they "get her temperature up again". what your actually describing is hypothermia which is when the body's core temperature drop very low. hyperthermia is the opposite and it become too. hot they sound very similar but are not the same. Just had to point that out because it's a pet peeve. Other then that nice job.
| vanessa chapter 6 . 8/19/2012
more more more more more more
| Fanficaddicttion chapter 6 . 8/19/2012
This was very sweet. I understand why you commented on mine the way you did because you deviated from the Once Upon a Time format and focused just on the fairytale world. It's great though. I love what you came up with.