Reviews for The Buried Life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I thought the story was pretty good. The plot was interesting and despite this having been written between Goblet of Fire and Order of the Phoenix, I thought you did a really good job with Snape's character, and all the characters as well. You didn't have much canon to go on at that point and you still did a good job on the characters. The plot itself was pretty good. I thought things between Hermione and Severus escalated rather quickly, though. They essentially fell deep in love with each other in just a few days. I thought the pacing of their relationship was much too quick. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. |
![]() ![]() LOVED your story. You are an estraordinary writer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully written and brought me to the edge of my seat. :) thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fabulous story! Thank you so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read this story back in 2005, when I first got into fan fiction. I remember loving it then, and now that I'm reading it again, I am blown away by the substance in this story. It has such depth and it clear that you put a great deal of thought and effort into this work. Applause, dear author! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a great story, thank you so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a great read. Thank you so much for writing;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Not…entirely," Severus said. "I do begin to think that it was more than just a deathbed attempt at ruining my life." Haha, hilarious but the ending to this chapter is anything but:-/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was an awesome way of showing their relationship developing, very cleaver, like they are, it fits perfectly. |
![]() ![]() Wow, what a great chapter. So much depth to all the characters except Dumbledore but the unknown adds to his mystery and my imagination takes over. I was wondering how (H/S) their relationship could change so much. It started with a kiss, but had a great slow boil to get there. Thanks so much for writing;-) |
![]() ![]() Famous last words. Wow, I so did not see this coming. Great plot twist ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm having fun :) |
![]() ![]() I absolutely loved this story! It was written so eloquently and with such descriptive language that I couldn't stop reading! Well done! Brilliant plot, wonderful character development, and you did a fantastic job of staying true to J.K. Rowling's characters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for the story. I like the atmosphere in this last chapter, and the dynamics between the characters. |