I like how Severus is showing that he does respect Hermione.

You planted the seed of attraction very skillfully.

I teared up when Sirius was dying. Good job.

I am reading this again. I think you capture Harry's frustration very well.

I love this story so much. Re-reading it after a long time, I love it even more. The plot is great, the writing is excellent, and the characterizations are so good. Most of all, the romance is so subtle and believable. Hats off!

Brilliant story, so glad I stumbled accross it :)

Hermione is of age in the wizarding world, so she would be allowed to do magic outside of the school There is also side-along apparition.

Harry can resist the Imperius.

Awww
I don't know what I expected... more interactions between Severus and Hermione? more effusion and exaltation maybe? Somehow, the way you ended your story was so appropriate, perfect. There did not need more than that, simple yet elegant and holding much more emotion into it :-)
I really enjoyed reading your fiction, took immense pleasure in discovering something so imaginative, well played with enough emotions, suspense and depth, but most of all well-written! Great story! :D
Cannot wait to read your other fictions ;-)

Gosh such a heart-breaking ending...

Fucking Hell! You sure know how to play with your readers... xD The moment when both Dumbledore and Harry realised neither of them had him... Gosh my heart literally stopped!
THAT ENDING! WOOOOOW... Dumbledore killed him, will he be prosecuted as well?

OH MY FUCKING GOD! I bet the bed was a portkey...

Gosh, such an exciting chapter, that was a roller-coaster of emotions!
Severus letter... oh my God... and the way he said goodbye to her as well ;(
I can't help but think Fawkes' feather is going to be crucial in this story... But then, it might just be me extrapolating xD

That is so unbelievably unfair! He risked his life trying to find Harry and saving him and that's what he's got?!

Awww the start of that chapter was so fucking sweet and romantic! Literally my heart was soaring for them! *dreamy eyes* xD The change in Severus' behaviour is astonishing!
That encounter in Gringotts with Gregor doesn't sound good...
Gosh! Fucking Finbar, just when our couple was doing good!