Reviews for The Buried Life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is still so good. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the surprise! |
![]() ![]() ![]() His letter to Hermione was so perfect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was beautifully done. I loved his awkwardness the first time he picked her up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how she managed him when he was in a bad mood! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how Severus is showing that he does respect Hermione. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You planted the seed of attraction very skillfully. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I teared up when Sirius was dying. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am reading this again. I think you capture Harry's frustration very well. |
![]() ![]() I love this story so much. Re-reading it after a long time, I love it even more. The plot is great, the writing is excellent, and the characterizations are so good. Most of all, the romance is so subtle and believable. Hats off! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant story, so glad I stumbled accross it :) |
![]() ![]() Hermione is of age in the wizarding world, so she would be allowed to do magic outside of the school There is also side-along apparition. |
![]() ![]() Harry can resist the Imperius. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww I don't know what I expected... more interactions between Severus and Hermione? more effusion and exaltation maybe? Somehow, the way you ended your story was so appropriate, perfect. There did not need more than that, simple yet elegant and holding much more emotion into it :-) I really enjoyed reading your fiction, took immense pleasure in discovering something so imaginative, well played with enough emotions, suspense and depth, but most of all well-written! Great story! :D Cannot wait to read your other fictions ;-) |