|Reviews for He Said He Had A Story|
| War Sage chapter 3 . 9/22/2014
Good chapter and as for chakra coils nothing to say about that, but doing Chakra control exercises might help.
| wtfh chapter 3 . 3/16/2014
Very interesting ideas you have so far. I can't wait for your next chapters. Since you placed your OC SI in what I presume is a original village, it'd be intriguing to see how you will play around with the politics and all.
Actually, there are a few male OC SI that I've read.
Pulling The Strings by Hubris Plus, where the OC SI is reborn in Sand.
It's a Mad Mad World by Memory25
Others I would recommend are :
Troublesome Timing by FrozenLights, is not exactly a self insert. But I highly recommend it.
Unsung Story of the Inconspicuous by Wrought, is a female OC.
Deja vu no Jutsu by Vixen Tail is another OC SI
Or simply go to Darkpetal16 profile.
There are a lot more. And like I said, I'm looking forward to your take on your story!
| Blackbird0 chapter 3 . 1/29/2014
Ooh, I like it, interesting twist! Update soon please!
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/22/2014
Hi could you update soon? It's looking good
| Justadream1 chapter 3 . 11/10/2013
You're story is hilarious please update soon!
| myownphilosophy101a chapter 3 . 5/21/2013
This is really really good, I hope you continue.
| vantweet chapter 3 . 5/6/2013
I like this story a lot. are you going to continue it?
| animagirl chapter 3 . 4/23/2013
Awesome maybe he should meet naruto and everyone at the chunin exams! So exciting!. He's a bit like Itachi-being a genius and all. I think the two can be good friends. Update soon! This is totally awesome
| Arwenia chapter 3 . 4/14/2013
YaaaY.! 3 Great story! I can't wait to read more. I also love that the OC is a guy and that it's different from Konoha and other countries. I like that it's unique. :D
| A Nest of Nargles chapter 3 . 3/14/2013
interesting, i can't wait to see where you decide to take this
| x chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
I like it.
| Nightraze chapter 3 . 1/25/2013
Awesome fic! Update soon!
| Kisa chapter 3 . 1/6/2013
This story is pure genius. I was pleasantly surprised to find that this wasn't one if those stupid oc stories, but rather an actual story with a good plot.
| FattySkeleton chapter 3 . 12/1/2012
Cool! Ya don't get many male oc/si stories! You're doing awesome! But you gotta make sure you don't make him too powerful or badass.
We don't want no Gary-drew. Or however that name went.
| Vaughn Tyler chapter 3 . 11/28/2012