Reviews for Train Ride
riad chapter 1 . 6/19
great story , it would be perfect for a horror movie haha .
tim chapter 1 . 4/25
Guest chapter 1 . 3/20
Really good, if you worked on the grammar and sentence structure, you could probably make a book out of this is you continued the story. More descriptive words needed and some sentences don't make sense, but the story line is great and I think you have done a great job.
Thanks for sharing this
Ryleigh KIDD chapter 1 . 2/13/2015
It was great! PLEASE WRITE A NEW ONE!Hey I know what you can write about! How about a slumber party?Think about it!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2014
That's scary
Super2atomic chapter 1 . 8/2/2014
U think this scares me? U should see my dreams
nicol chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
too boring sorry :(
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Nice story
Guest chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
This was a really good story
LoveZZzz chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Love ur stories everywhere I go I am looking for anyone unusual
Lady Oakenshield chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
I'm never going on an empty train again...but I loved the story! Amazing!
cheese123m chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
Wow, that was a nice story! That would have been freaky!
ScaryStoriesAreMyLife chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
I Love It. I Hope You Make More. I Read Them All. Look For My Stories. Should Be Here Soon.
gossipgirl20122012 chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
ArrancarRayflo chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
I enjoyed it, it was creepy.