Reviews for A Love So Broken
jk chapter 17 . 2/4/2016
you say there will be zero Edward and leah in this story...except there is already more then zero leah and Edward...hes in the gym checking her out and thinking about her ass...and shes flirting and touching him...that's more then zero dumbass. and why not leah...you've already made him a nasty used up slut...whats one more whore?
jk chapter 12 . 2/4/2016
this is what I don't get...Edwards the one that fucked up..and instead of bella getting her Edward back and him trying to fix this...she will end up getting a drug addict and aclcoholic manwhore? that doesn't seem fair for bella.
he didn't deserve her before but now? nOT EVEN FUCKING CLOSE
kheine chapter 36 . 12/2/2014
Borrowing your own words from chapter 30 can't wait for the finished product!
KimiD chapter 5 . 11/19/2014
Well, he went back to the beginning, now he needs to really start disecting and really think about the things that Bella had been saying for quite some time... do the math Edward, you still love her like crazy, start thinking about when it stopped being all about her... you were so busy trying to build a life for you and Bella... you forgot to live it with her!
KimiD chapter 4 . 11/19/2014
I love that Alice is Her little sister this time... He needs to really stop and think about how things got so messed up. It he starts tracing it back... he'll figure it out!
KimiD chapter 3 . 11/19/2014
Wow, what a wakeup call
KimiD chapter 2 . 11/19/2014
Hindsight is Always 20/20
cmb897 chapter 36 . 10/19/2014
These characters are so real! That sounds odd probably, but honestly, most of the Edward and Bella stories that I have loved are the ones that are the most realistic and flawed. I think that's why Twilight was so successful. Take away the supernatural aspect and Edward and Bella are just two flawed people learning to grow together. Thank you for writing this story! I look forward to your update. D
pauleen chapter 35 . 9/26/2014
I missed reding the updates on this story. I am so proud of Edwards subority. I can see him and bella working things out
jk chapter 32 . 9/22/2014
Solo all she gets is. A netter Edward body..that's her constalaton prize?
jk chapter 30 . 9/22/2014
Soooo he fucks up...then fucks up again Bella gets one guy..Edward getstons of sluts...why is bellBella getting the short stick again? Bella needs to get laid pronto...how about Adrian from va? Hell ya
jk chapter 26 . 9/22/2014
Duuuuuck that...run bellla! You can do so much better
jk chapter 24 . 9/22/2014
All the shit he's done and Bella still
Has to go to him? Duck poor Bella she deserves some soooo much better someone willing to right for her ya know...he's such a piece of and USS.
jk chapter 22 . 9/22/2014
Fuck come on Bella doesn't need a washes up manwhore...they had only. Been with each other and I bet that meant something to Bella...but not only did he fuck up their relationship but he epically failes to did it, became a whore and a alcoholic...why is Bella getting the short end of the stick...fuck that
jk chapter 20 . 9/22/2014
I don't get how the fuck a beiber card is funny...have a sang in bday? That's funny? Um nope not even a I think Leah can go duck herself. Stupid whore. Anywayz I hope u don't have Bella get back with dirty dick...I mean he was shit to her when they were together nut now he's also a whore and a alcoholic...she deserves much bettet
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