Reviews for Dark Secrets
IrishBug74 chapter 14 . 5/30/2013
Great story!
The Cretin chapter 14 . 5/13/2013
Talk about a day of new additions to the family... 8D

I'm glad Slithe got the ending he did. I always felt there was more to the character than the series let on.

I'm glad Tygra grew out of his jerkness. Does his character well. May he and his love live a long, fruitful life.

Finally, I'm glad for Lion-O and Cheetara. I have every expectation that the dynasty they start will rule Thundera for a thousand years.

Great work at storytelling. You are excellent at the craft. I do hope to see you again. We've come to the end of this journey. I hope to start another with you. :) Stay strong and keep rockin
The Cretin chapter 13 . 5/13/2013
Great work on tying all the flashbacks together. They really suited what the chap was all about.

Well it seems that all is returning to well in Thundera. It may be a little late but I hope they have a boy. One that runs his Dad ragged D

The romance was real, your presentation clear. Now I'm off to read the next chap. One more to go. Keep rockin
The Cretin chapter 12 . 5/11/2013
My condolences to your friend. I know what he's going through.

Great chap. You wrote this battle well. Also...Cheetara's news was heartmeltingly sweet (3 So a little one is on the way. Awesomesauce. I guess I'll have to call it a night but I will finish this out tomorrow. Best wishes. Keep rockin
The Cretin chapter 11 . 5/11/2013
Everybody gets a block of some kind. Loved he exhilaration, the tempo, and the tension at the end especially. There's only one Mumm-Ra and he has a taste for lion. Let's see if the Lord of the Thundercats is up to the challenge. Great chap. Keep rockin
The Cretin chapter 10 . 5/11/2013
I love how descriptive you are in writing. I may have said it before but it helps greatly on imagery. I like how I can "feel" what Lion-O and Cheetara feel and I can "see" exactly where their predicament is. You do very well at showing insecurities: Cheetara's in that she loves a king despite her "lower" birth and Lion-O in how his feelings and reactions get mixed up over Cheetara. Great job. Off to read the next chap. Keep rockin
The Cretin chapter 9 . 5/11/2013
Great job here. I like the new dynamic between Tygra and his adopted family. He's finally maturing.

Lion-O my friend, you fell in love with a warrior. That's who Cheetara is and that's who she's going to be.

Good work on Cheetara. You maintain her independence and you kept her in character. All around, a very enjoyable chap. Hope to read more. I'll be back. Keep rockin
The Cretin chapter 8 . 5/11/2013
Every story's gonna have its share of hurdles to jump. I think you crossed the finish line on this chap in good form.

Great job. It had good dialogue, good introspection, and I think you get 5 stars on the romance meter between the spots and sovereign. :) Hey there's spots and stripes and then there's spots and sovereign. It's all s...anyways, off the read the next chap. I'm getting there. Keep rockin
The Cretin chapter 7 . 5/8/2013
Hey writer's block happens to all writers at least once. There's no getting around it.

Good job with Pumyra. When written right, she's of immense value. Thank you for not making her psycho. I like the growing that Lion-O has done over the course of this story. It continues with this chap. Finally deciding that his father's views no longer matter on who he sees as a potential romance is a big step. Awesome work RD.

Well I'm halfway there...but this ain't no Lifehouse. D I'll get there eventually. Take care. Keep rockin
The Cretin chapter 6 . 5/8/2013
I have to say this: Awesome death scene for Grune. Who doesn't like a good beheading for a villain? D

Great work on the fight. Action is the blood of adventure. You write it well.

Good work on Lion-O and Cheetara. As well, good work on Tygra. In case I haven't mentioned it before, I think you caught his jealousy well.

Off to read the next chap. Keep rockin
The Cretin chapter 5 . 5/7/2013
I like it when I can pick up emotions in characters. For instance, great job with Lion-O. I can feel the frustration he has with such things as the traditionalist views his family and people would hold on marriage to one of "proper" birth. I also enjoy the growing rivalry the tiger and lion have once again. You write it better than what we got in the show. Kudos. Finally, thank you for giving Cheetara a measure of integrity as a character. Hope to read more tomorrow. Keep rockin.
The Cretin chapter 4 . 5/4/2013
I have to say that you write Jaga very well. I think that's always an important factor for a good TC story since the guy reminds me of Obi-wan. The "Mentor" is always important.

I like how you handle the detail. It helps me with the imagery and how it turns out in my head. One of my "judge factors" (I swear I should have my own show, I'd burn Simon Cowell anyday) but one of the things I judge on is how "vivid" imagery comes to me when reading a story and its setting. You pull it off grandiose. Kudos. Awesome job. Hope to read more tomorrow. Keep rockin
The Cretin chapter 3 . 5/3/2013
Just you wait...you'll be up to a hundred reviews yet. :)

Loved the interplay between Grune and Mumm-Ra. You write those two well. It's always important to put as much into the villains as you put into the heroes so good job there.

I like how you write Cheetara. You handle her internal debate with realism. Of course, great job with Lion-O as well. All around, an enjoyable, well written chap. Keep rockin
The Cretin chapter 2 . 5/2/2013
I have to say that you handled the "mystery" of the chap very well as in- you don't reveal too much but still enough to keep a reader guessing. That's a great skill. Loved it. The characterization is also sound and you do good with dialogue. A great chap. Hope to read more tomorrow. Keep rockin
JustLucky05 chapter 14 . 5/2/2013
That was a great ending to a fantastic story. I love the fact that they had twins, and Slithe being alive was a nice twist! you did a wonderful job, and I can't wait to see what you will do now. I hope another great TC fic is on the way, and I will be waiting eagerly!
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