Reviews for Temple Battle
Anonymus chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
I'm not sure if Sangheilis have Hair or Fur that covers their body :/
otherwise it was inspiring to read.
MillaTime chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
i like the idea. and ive been pondering on doing this as well. i say do it. keep it rollin have fun with it
Original Heartless chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Definite continue. But, is the Thane guy like Thane Krios from Mass Effect?
Kirby4040 chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
extend it i approve
Str4divarius chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Great, I'd love to see more.
Every time I see the word Thane in this I immediately think of the Drell from Mass Effect xD unless that's actually who you're talking about O.O I doubt it though, if he can speak incantations to use magic. The magic he's using is eerily similar to Eragon though.
I can't fully understand who these characters are, if all you're crossing is Halo and StarWars, or even where the setting is (I'm assuming the temple on Corasaunt [I can't remember how to spell it]) but it looks great so far.
Write more soon!
Lost Guy chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
i would like to see where this gose...