|Reviews for Wonder|
| Ralinde chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
I like the idea of this. I too picture them getting closer after thewar, but not immediately and not without a lot of fights either. So this fic fitted nicely into that image.
One thing I would like to point out: the most important thing for Legilimency is eye-contact, so if Andromeda is hiding behind a bookcase some 20 meters across from Narcissa, there is no way Narcissa would be able to perform Legilimency on her. Lest she was even more skilled than the Dark Lord and we all know he was the greatest Legilimens ever.
| cherryredxx chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
One thing that I want to point out: it's "canon," not "cannon."
Anyway, I love post-war stories, and I liked this one. I always wondered what happened to the relationship between Andromeda and Narcissa afterwards. I like that you didn't resolve anything here, but you still had them take a first step. Good job.
| ChocolateTeapot chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Interesting work! It's nice to see a story where Andromeda doesn't just forgive Narcissa.
| theircatlives chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
I really enjoyed this! :)