Reviews for On Enemy Territory
Yuki Artsa chapter 1 . 12/10/2014
XD HELL YES BRAH 33333
alfamky chapter 1 . 7/26/2014
Ahhh yeah totally this was a great read, thanks for the wonderful visuals
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
cool story
Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
"I was wondering if you wanted some chicken?"

PRICELESS XD
A cat called whisper chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
love thiss story, so much detail
ghoul-slut chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
its really good, honestly, one of my favourite fics on these two ;)
SoulMore chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
FAN!
AlwenaRin chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
Aw, Kid can be so sweet when he wants to! And Law's parting gift is just as cute :D
The end made my day, I'm still laughing my head out! Thanks for this story :D
(And I've read your other works : just as nice, I love them!)
azab chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
I loved it a lot why didnt you countinue it
Erebos chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
"not very good"? It was the first lemon I've read and I didn't notice it was a first fanfiction. It was according to the personality of both Kidd and Law, and very hilarious thanks to drunk Killer XD

and... next chapter? I WANT IT NOW! xD...please :3

P.S.: I'm sorry if there is any mistake U english is not my mother language, as I think you already notice because of what I said first xDU
Guest chapter 2 . 11/8/2012
Good start just needs some editing!
DeidaraUlquiorra chapter 2 . 11/8/2012
pun intended at the end there, aye? XDDD Killer you naggy bugger.
Hotaru Vie Jaegerjaquez chapter 2 . 11/8/2012
Kidd's crew is over-protective hehehehehehe XD
I'll look forward for the next chapter... Hope you make it faster and longer
Guest.124 chapter 2 . 11/8/2012
Nice, though i didn't think you would update this anymore, but i'm really glad that you did!
DeidaraUlquiorra chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
XD Must've been pretty loud sex those two had X3 . wonder what would Killer make of Kid's ass now that he knows that Kid has been with Law XD
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