Reviews for The Affair
Guest101 chapter 1 . 6/19
I love this ️ It's so fucking EPIC!
Francy chapter 25 . 5/19
This must be one of the cutest fanfictions I've ever read. I know it's been posted a long time ago, but thank you Anyway
MelenePandora chapter 25 . 4/2
So far the story is good, but blaming Irina because of her travelling Is too much, you should focused more on Edward's issue of falling out of love with his wife...
And I really agree with Anon, XxbpmathisxX, and Cecily...
Anon chapter 19 . 3/1
I know this is supposed to be a happy chapter but, Bella being such a pushover and saying how “the feminist” in her should be mad is pissing me off. How about just being a self respecting person? She’s honestly terrible. You can be young and still have the self respect and control to say you’re going to do something and do it. I’m not saying she should be a super strong “feminist” but goddamn. She’s a spineless bitch
Anon chapter 7 . 3/1
Why is Irina selfish? She’s living her dream job while also retaking care of her kids. The only wrong thing I think she did was cheat on her husband but other than that, why can’t she have her job and her family? Edward does it. His job just happens to be conveniently closer. And how is he any better? When he’s not at work, he’s screwing some young woman he just met instead of being with his kids. There are no good characters so far.
winnodinno chapter 14 . 12/21/2017
Bella definitely did the right thing. Edward is being a blind immature ass
Guest chapter 9 . 10/23/2017
Late to the party but I am loving it so far :)
suzanne02 chapter 10 . 9/21/2017
If I had to guess...Edwards wife is having an affair too...
FemBot3005 chapter 10 . 9/6/2017
You cant use shower gel as lube dude. That is an instant infection.. Come on now... I love your stories but that's a noooooooo. Reading that part made my stomach hurt lol.
princeselisa chapter 25 . 6/30/2017
I really enjoyed this story. I loved the ending!
charbronte chapter 25 . 6/24/2017
Love this story!
cullen2798 chapter 25 . 6/1/2017
Aweee! That was a great story! And also OMG! 8 KIDS!
XxbpmathisxX chapter 10 . 5/8/2017
Since your pen name is Johnny boy I can only assume you are a guy. You said in your story that Edward used shower gel as lube and took Bella roughly. As a woman... if I were to use soap inside the vagina it would/could cause an infection and be potentially harmful. It says very specifically on womens private soaps not to use it inside the vagina much less on regular shower gel. Seeing you write that honestly made me cringe. I'm shocked Jenny your beta said nothing. Just info for future stories. By the way I love your work. I've read many of your stories. You are very talented.
Cecily chapter 25 . 2/6/2017
That is a lot of kids! But finally a girl! No doubt she will be the apple of Edward's eyes.
Cecily chapter 24 . 2/6/2017
Irina should not have gotten so much money, what about her affairs?
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