Reviews for The Affair
G licious chapter 25 . 5/16/2016
Great story !
labellavampira chapter 24 . 4/9/2016
Okay...why have HER affairs never been mentioned?
She had an affair...why wasn't that brought up in "mediation"
That's ridiculous...
That could have been in the papers. He could have divorced her forever ago.
And did they "reconnect" like she wanted after Bella decided to call it quits?
So confused. To much unexplained. To much glossed over.
I love your writing but I don't understand this story at all. The people/interactions are very strange. Especially the characters reactions to the affair :/ Alice, Esmé, Irina...they all SLAMMED Bella and Edward for having an affair...yet Irina had one or more.
el chapter 25 . 4/1/2016
Sweet family fic...loved it.
yuvi2669 chapter 25 . 3/9/2016
Wao I just finished your story and I loved it! Real people with real situations that they can't control. Perfectly imperfect.
Wendyg63 chapter 25 . 1/29/2016
Cute story. Lots of passion and lemons. Sweet
Wendyg63 chapter 24 . 1/29/2016
A good work of fiction it is
Wendyg63 chapter 22 . 1/29/2016
Bella says she wants marriage and kids. But then wants to go clubbing. Let her go Edward.
Wendyg63 chapter 21 . 1/29/2016
Meeting Esme and the children all in one day - must be unreal to Bella. Story Bella does ok
Wendyg63 chapter 20 . 1/28/2016
I'm sorry but Edward is awful. And stupid.

Like the story regardless of his actions.
Wendyg63 chapter 19 . 1/28/2016
I think that it's wrong and tacky to bring Bella to his marital home. Not impressed with our boy
Wendyg63 chapter 17 . 1/28/2016
They both are hurting... But Edward is being a big baby. He had options... He didn't move on any of them.
Wendyg63 chapter 15 . 1/28/2016
Overdue props for Jenny. She's a wonderful beta.

JB - your story is a classic. I love your characters, their fire and passion. I love Edwards kids. Irina is a bit- as usual.
Wendyg63 chapter 14 . 1/28/2016
Edward is being selfish and unfair.

Get a new dentist... Lol
Wendyg63 chapter 13 . 1/28/2016
She has every right to question his intent. Poor Bella.
Wendyg63 chapter 12 . 1/28/2016
Poor Bella. Edward hasn't committed. What will happen next
4,995 | « Prev Page 1 .. 2 3 4 5 6 13 .. Last Next »