|Reviews for The Return of the Original Demon King|
| Narudi18 chapter 4 . 9/14/2012
*squeal* Finally someone writing wolfram x shinou! I love you so much!
I want to read when Aldrich and wolfram become closer or how their relationship is developed.
How does that name Aldrich came to?
Anyway I love you and don't forget to update
| crystal chapter 4 . 8/22/2012
I really like the idea of this pairing, so i hope you continue with it! The plot is really interesting as well. :)
| Ciel Phantomhive chapter 4 . 8/19/2012
Another absolutely fantastic fanfiction by you. Truthfully, I had come across this one without knowing you had written it, and was surprised that it was written so well. Then when I had checked who the author was, I wasn't so surprised anymore. I'm so glad you've started another one, I can't tell you how much I enjoyed all your previous fanfictions, they are ingenious. If it wasn't obvious enough, I most definitely will continue this and you should know I am starving for another chapter already. I have no constructive criticism, sad to say, so this will just be a review flattering you without much feedback. I love the way you write, the details, the form, the plot and drama and the excellent portrayal of the characters from the series as well as excellently made OCs.
Your years of work into this series have really made a difference in this fandom, for all the years I've been reading them, and in truth, I have been writing my own fanfictions for a couple of years now, none yet published because I'm a bit shy, but I can only hope that they are anywhere as good as yours. I am also delighted that this fanfiction is Shinou x Wolfram as I ship them as well (but my obsession for a while has been Sara x Wolfram, crazy, I know, sounds way OOC, but there are reasons I enjoy it, as strange as they may be, and if you are also a fan and wrote a fanfiction for them it would be absolutely delightful). Although I don't have an account (due to years of being indecisive over a pen name, my name now is completely unoriginal as you probably know), know that I have always been and will always be an anonymous lurking admirer. You are seriously my favourite fanfiction author. Just keep doing what you always do!
| Alasse chapter 4 . 8/12/2012
I enjoy the interaction of Wolfram and Shinou. I was laughed a lot, this Wolfram is so cute and shinou was hilarious when attacked him (the mental imagen hahaha), so I dont can wait- I want read for romance between both... That remeber me poor yuuri almost never stay with Wolf, (only in Masquerade and yes, Ambivalence but that for any reason I don't consider)...Oh wolf is the true cheater hahaha...
¡Thank for the chapter! I wait the next, See you!...Right sorry if i have some mistake or this reviews is confused.
| darkness of hell8 chapter 4 . 8/10/2012
a great story. i am a great fan of shinou x wolfram. and its the first time i came across a story that contained this pairing. looking forward for more
| Raywolf Shibelt chapter 4 . 8/4/2012
Great chapter! I can hardly wait for your next post! Hopefully you can update soon, pretty please..? The plot is very appealing and your writing is very good. I like your style and the way you give substance to the characters. I know it mostly focus on Wolf and Al(Shinou?) but one can still feel the existence of other characters and their roles as well. Am I making sense or what? Sorry if that's the case. I'm tired, I guess. Need a lot of rest. Anyway, I want to let you know that I think this story is very interesting and I love to see more of it.
| yay chapter 3 . 8/1/2012
I had a dream that Wolfram married Shinou and they had babies 2 years ago.
I love the fact that I am not the only one who thinks so!
| Tenshi no Nanimo chapter 3 . 7/29/2012
Awesome chapter! I can just feel the tension between Wolfram and Aldrich's interaction... I wonder what Aldrich will do to Wolfram next chapter...
Aaw, thanks for the special mention! Authors like you keep the Wolfram fandom alive, which I am extremely grateful for! )
| Zafira chapter 3 . 7/28/2012
I like it, will wait to read the continuation
| Raywolf Shibelt chapter 3 . 7/28/2012
Oh, gosh! I'm so begging you right now to update very, very soon! Please, please, please? The story is awesome! I'm loving it!
| Alasse chapter 3 . 7/28/2012
First sorry my bad english, I speak spanish and only i can is read and writte how a baby, (i'm autodidact)... Well I am your fans. i read all your fanfic (or I was try) and i love them and this too, although is complicated understand, for the trama and my little capacity, but really I happy when your come back with a new chapter, I want read it and know the finish.
I like Wolfram and is my character favorite too, so i like see him with other, is entertaining, more when the writter is good and have ideas that capture my attention, and... a original character sexy and hot ha ha ha...
i like to know more and writter a better review, how this history deserves, but for the moment only i can say (without the fear to mistake ) is Thank for the history and i waiting for the next part :)
| Belldandy55555 chapter 3 . 7/28/2012
It's intriguing... Is he really shinou? Or a part of him? When is the next? My fav character is wolf so I don't care if yuuri don't finish with him!
| setsuko teshiba chapter 2 . 7/25/2012
A very promising story you have here :D
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| Tenshi no Nanimo chapter 2 . 7/24/2012
Somehow, I feel a wee bit disappointed that nothing happened between them; but then again, that's just the warped side of me talking... )
Yay! Shinou finally appeared! I wonder what's wrong with Shinou and his inability to contact Ulrike... Hmmm..
As always, you've portrayed Wolfram perfectly. Now, I just can't get enough of him! Will be waiting for the next chapter!
| Raywolf Shibelt chapter 2 . 7/23/2012
So many intrigues! I'm liking this very much! Hope the next chapter is up... I can't wait and see if my guesses are right! Thanks so much for sharing. Have a nice day!