Reviews for Changing Fate
Loner Kid chapter 3 . 3/14/2014
i dont think hayato would be smart eough to figureit out that fast...
Guest chapter 8 . 12/11/2013
The last two chapter were written differently
Guest chapter 6 . 12/11/2013
Alfeo kinda reminds me of a gokudera without the whole puppy love and overwhelming devotion thing
Bloodstained Fantasy chapter 8 . 7/10/2013
It's...weird...? They're really OOC. They accept each other so easily that it's super weird. Especially Tsuna. Tsuna would definitely unable to do so because he would be all like 'I don't deserve this, I took what's rightfully Tsunahime's' and stuff. And goes try his best to get back to his own world and save Tsunahime.

And with the guardians, they also won't accept the parallel Tsuna so easily too. Because they should've known that this Tsuna isn't their Tsuna, the gender difference should emphasize on this point. The boy Tsuna did not accept them, Tsunahime did. The ones Tsuna accepted and love aren't them, the said people had already died. Tsuna did not spent time and went through hardships with them, Tsunahime did. But Tsunahime is dead, and Tsuna is not Tsunahime.
I personally think that the according to their personalities, they're not the type to just accept a parallel version of their sky and treat him the same as theirs just because their sky died. They would've thought that Tsuna is NOT Tsunahime
Tsuna's not the kin
d to just let someone off if they hurt and even KILLED his friends (unless they really became a good guy, like Byakuran and Mukuro).

And the story's too short, many things unexplained, their feelings are too roughly descibed. But I like your idea of the plot, maybe you should rewrite it. It has potential but you ended the story abruptly. It should be a long time project instead of a short story which only lasts 8 chapters
GreenDrkness chapter 8 . 1/27/2013
yay yay Gambatte they all had a happy life in the end
Keep on the writes
Fi Suki Saki chapter 8 . 12/9/2012
Eh? Done? So fast!

What a simple but not simple story!
But I still confused! ahahaha.. well, leave it be.

As long as they all happy! ;)
Soul Vrazy chapter 8 . 10/4/2012
Why there two story complete today!
Why you too!
XD
kittynyanya chapter 6 . 9/7/2012
i got my spacers taken out and braces put on two days ago and they hurt so bad! X( i also take advil but even though i took one this morning all i had for breakfast was a pice of buttered bread and i could barley even eat that it hurt so bad so i feel your pain good story update soon :D
saphire644 chapter 6 . 8/28/2012
I know what spacers are, they don't actually hurt that much, wait until you get braces, they hurt sooo much. I got my braces off last month, I had them for 10 months.
Soul Vrazy chapter 6 . 8/28/2012
Teehee!
(*sweat drop*)
Serika Ootori chapter 6 . 8/28/2012
Haha. I remember getting spacers... Lol. Anyways good job :D
Guest chapter 6 . 8/28/2012
i want to read more ! please hurry up and it's a good story !
Dante flames chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
HOLY CRAP YES,this is amazing
cancer718 chapter 5 . 8/14/2012
Can i ask something?isnt 'alphonso' its the first cavallone boss name? Just asking :)
Soul Vrazy chapter 5 . 8/13/2012
I reading!
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