|Reviews for Sailor Moon Classic: Part 1 Return of the Sailors|
| Kitsune Jackson chapter 13 . 3/27/2013
On that was sad and amazing at the same time. I feel they will keep there promises. And I did not expect that last part. However you shoud phrase the last line a little different. Ex "there merry laughter died down as they heard the evil cackling of jadite...mwhahahaha" classic.
| Kitsune Jackson chapter 12 . 3/27/2013
Weep I hope she does learn cuz Serena has potential. And like that she apologizes. Andyeah Luna has some romance empathy. I would like to see Sere and Dare get together before finding out about the past.
| Kitsune Jackson chapter 11 . 3/27/2013
I do NOT like Beryl. So mean killing Jadeite and doing all that to the generals (if the storyline is similar that is). But like the trainer thing is so cool and I love the virtue parts.
| Kitsune Jackson chapter 10 . 3/27/2013
I knew it was Raye's grandpa that would be the trainer I knew it. Espicially after Luna laughed about what he had become. There are some minor grammer mistakes by the way... Around the beginning when they go into the bus.
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/2/2013
Wow this story is so good. I have only just found this story and i couldnt stop reading it. I a big fan of Sailor Moon but i really love your story and its original plot. Please Please Update soon
| Kitsune Jackson chapter 13 . 2/18/2013
I thought you would leave me hanging but you are back YAY
| LoveInTheBattleField chapter 13 . 2/18/2013
Keep it coming.
| Kitsune Jackson chapter 8 . 1/11/2013
Ohhhhh their gonna find rei-rei I'm think. Anyway this is good but I'm still kinda confused with the whole phoebe/Peggy thing. I mean Amy and the girls are reincarnations of the first and foremost right? Idk I keep getting confused ahhhhhh. Help me please (whine)
| Kitsune Jackson chapter 7 . 1/9/2013
Oh okay so Peggy is sailor mercury's mom in both the past and present ok. Ok that's better, although it would be nice if Celine really was Serena's mom again. Meh but is Serena one of the original nine or is she just a princess. And and and yah I'm so confused. Darn it, and I wanna see Saturn meh
| Kitsune Jackson chapter 6 . 1/9/2013
Wow wait wait wait so Amy's mom was one of the original nine, but I thought Amy was reincarnation. Whattttttttttt. But beside that this is so awesome I always loved Amy ,
| Kitsune Jackson chapter 5 . 1/9/2013
Oh luna kouwai so ni (poor thing) my heart goes out to her. But Serena is such a good person she makes me happy
| thunderbird chapter 12 . 1/7/2013
I love your story very much. At first I wasn't sure about it but now I am and I can't wait to read more.
| Starrlight1812 chapter 12 . 1/6/2013
It isn't often I sit down and start reading then lose track of time because the story engages me so well I truly can't put it down. In your case, I've been up for nearly two days straight and with every moment I've had, I've been reading your delightful tale. I thoroughly enjoy the uniquness of the plot and I feel you've taken a fantastic direction with it.
My only critique us that in places you have missed words out completely or the grammar isn't quite sure its simply something you've read over and not seen, but I do reccommend triple checking and perhaps editing at a later stage the previous chapters simply to correct these minor errors. They can detract from what one is reading and decreases the quality of your work. If you don't have a beta reader may I suggest you get a close friend or family member to read over your work in order to minimise the grammatical errors(that is if you would rather not utilise one of the ones here)?
Regardless, keep up the great work, I'm really looking forward to your updates, and know that even though I don't always review, I ALWAYS read the update _
| LoveInTheBattleField chapter 12 . 1/5/2013
Keep it coming, Happy New Year!
| Kitsune Jackson chapter 4 . 1/5/2013
Dum dum dum dum duuuuum. So Jadeite is a bit uptight and he remembers ish everything ish I think. Meh and dang she like spider man, which is kinda cool. I'm happy Darien is in high school and not college. That makes so much more sense. Yup ya pretty awesome this is.