Reviews for Running for my Life
xxEatMyCakexx chapter 2 . 2/15/2013
This looks promising, update soon :D
Ro chapter 2 . 7/30/2012
Great story, needs some work
Meggies1104 chapter 2 . 7/27/2012
This is good! I think it has some potential, but I would try not use 'bro' so much. It gets to repetitive, and makes the story lose some emotional appeal. So just try using a bigger vocabulary. Other than that I think the story is good. :)
Faby Lopez chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Nice I'm liking this way more :D
But just try to put commas and other punctuation marks on the correct places because you're missing some of them; other than that, it's getting better :D