Reviews for The Forgotten Daughter
Purple Marshmellows chapter 28 . 5/15
I adore this story! I swear I'm addicted to it! I know it hasn't been updated since 2012 but a person can hope can't she?
PlumpyGod chapter 5 . 5/10
Great writing, I love the story.

However I must point out, because it just now occurred to me not because it's specific to your story. You don't always faint backwards.

I have in fact passed out/fainted forwards. Not once but twice. Once in the worming I stood up very quick blood rushes to my head and I passed out, I fell forwards. Another time I had been doing strenuous activities before a music class and when playing my marimba I fell forwards onto it.

So not really a negative point on your story, because it's on everyone's and I know from experience it isn't true.

Anyway, so far it's great!
Eagle Dreamer chapter 28 . 4/14
I really enjoyed it.
Guest chapter 28 . 3/31
I love it
Guest chapter 27 . 3/31
This is so good
trollzillathefirst chapter 1 . 1/18
I love how petty Zeus and Poseidon are. Its like two little kids who were besties but got into a big pointless right.
chicwowwow chapter 26 . 1/2
probably too much to ask for, but how about a thunder bird, like that one in Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them.
bkasavan chapter 28 . 12/24/2016
This story is quite good. I hope you decide to update it again :)
dloold87 chapter 5 . 11/30/2016
You are completely wrong about who would win in a battle between Melinda and Percy.. The only reason they would be close is if you actually nerf her like it seems your going to. Harry always had power to spare in the books, He had a core bigger than either Bumbles or Voldy, he just never had the control or experience they did. However if she actually has the power of cannon Harry and gains good control of her magic, Percy would lose big time. Since she was blessed by Hecate, that should not only increase her magic power but also her control and ability, since Hecate is godess of magic. Now take all that away and nerf her like it seems is gonna happen and she still wins just on sheer experience in fighting alone. Plus magic is so flexible and versatile that it would make it easy to beat him just with transfiguration or charms. If she actually works on her demigod powers or even uses them, she would be far more powerful than Percy just by age alone, again not to mention being blessed by a second god, which Percy never was.
WantToBeADog chapter 18 . 11/17/2016
I know this was written long ago but at theChaos and disorder" thing I lost it
Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2016
Never did like Athena in the books, she always seemed like she tried to stay relevant through her esteemed knowledge and wisdom. Same with Annabeth. They made her out to be so knowledgeable about everything when really...it's just common knowledge to anyone who studied Classical Mythology. The books just made her seem like she was the strong female goddess among the men but really...she wasn't much
Avantika chapter 10 . 10/1/2016
i love this story. Thanks a lot for writing it
flyingreddog chapter 16 . 9/23/2016
love how Ron keeps making accurate predictions
Guest chapter 5 . 9/16/2016
ok first i love this fic. Now nit picking any god weapon or anything made of Celestial Bronze should be able keep them safe from the killing curse why you may ask its a mortal spell these are stuff that are wayyyyyyyyyyyy beyond mortal spells they
Guest chapter 4 . 9/16/2016
the whole thing with the hat i thought of doing for a year now. That is if i was going to do fic of Harry Potter X0
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