Reviews for Broken
Luigi the Dusk chapter 1 . 7/26

This refreshing shot of burning brandy made a nice change to the marshmallow-in-melted-chocolate-and-sugar-water I've been drinking for the last 30 minutes.

Kujo and Avril huh? Sounds wouldn't be too surprising. Victorique is perfect and Best Girl Hands Down, but she's too Sherlock-Holmes-y to marry Kujo-Watson.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/15/2016
I can't forgive you ! I mean, kujo and Victorique are meant to be together ! "Kujo Kazuya an Avril Bradley's Wedding" should be a grammatically incorrect sentence ! The entire anime and manga is a proof of that !
Well, I'll forgive you, in only one condition. That you write another fanfic to explain how something like that could happen. Like, it's just a nightmare, or Kujo has something in mind by doing so, or he does this for Victorique's sake, or he was forced by someone. I don't know... But do something !
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2016
That cannot happen! Victorique and Kujo belong to each other! Avril is a tiny speck and has nothing to do with them! I don't hate her, but she does not belong!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2015
Fuck you you just ripped out my hart
ShadowBlade4444 chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
Londerland chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
Noooo. Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.
Victorique has to end up with Kujo or she'll have no one ;-;
April Catastrophe chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
this is so sadddddd... i think this made me dislike avril just a tiny bit more.
Death101- Fox Version chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
Ouch. I honestly felt a knife twist into me when I read the final line. Not exactly what I had in mind when I wanted to read my first Gosick fanfiction but the character matched well here and the detail was amazing. I haven't seen the anime in a little over a year but I could picture the area very clearly. I'm not really sure what is the accepted norm for Gosick fanfiction but in terms of general fanfiction, this was really well done. Awesome job!
KiataXIII chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
Aw, this is saddening. Poor Victorique.
Primo chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
Oh no, you're awful (that's a good fanfic, but you're still awful) ! Poor Victorique.
AuthorSwimmerPoet chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
I loved this story! It was so passionate and depressing and I felt Victorique's ache...and then it ended, and I wanted to smack you. I know it's your story so you get to pick how it goes, but I just can't see how Kujo would have chosen Avril over Victorique. It doesn't make sense to his character. I think I would have been much more satisfied at the ending if he had been dead, or even if he just been one of those frustratingly distant husbands always away working when all the wife wants is to see him once in a while...

Sorry that was a bit of a rant... :)

I do think you are a great writer and I look forward to reading more Gosick fanfics from you, if of course you ever write any more :)
IKnowWhatI'mTalkinAbout chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
Victorique T.T
Kujo you baka!
Avril I will CRAP YOU UP for marrying him when he's supposed to be with Victorique! (No offense to Kavril fans, I just don't like them together at all)

Good one-shot, I liked it. There were some parts that I kept re-reading, but still wasn't getting, but that may have been just me so don't really worry about that.
VictoriqueD.Blois11 chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO TT_TT Not Bradley! Not Bradley! I mean she's nice but not her! TT_TT Gawd this was so intense TT_TT
animeluv3 chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
oh my fudginf glob.! this is a terrible story bbut its genius.! its terribly genius.! XD this would make a great story full of drama heartbreack and all that jazz.! if u wanna please continue.! *just saying*
Cutevampkitten03 chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
I miss you!
That was sad but sweet, poor vicky... :(
-love, VAMP
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